tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post7749335656750688089..comments2023-09-11T15:12:15.091+01:00Comments on Swi:tə Poetry: on she and his ( re edited)Dulçe ♥http://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-50707813413950216862012-03-03T17:54:29.990+00:002012-03-03T17:54:29.990+00:00Such a powerful poem. Your skill in choosing and u...Such a powerful poem. Your skill in choosing and using words is amazing.agujahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15857809123531088629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-32108245111995674532012-03-01T11:36:42.093+00:002012-03-01T11:36:42.093+00:00I love the powerful image you achieve with the wor...I love the powerful image you achieve with the words "his head up, hers down" which by the way is very symbolic... Also love the innocence that begans in the poem in contrast with her final mature actitude of "searching for answers". Poor foul...I hope she learnt, because if not...there are more "first times" around. <br /><br />I wonder how can you be so profound with such an economy of language.<br /><br />Lot of hugs Dulce!Anne Frankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04096082963723781383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-70840717702693093212012-02-27T17:21:07.754+00:002012-02-27T17:21:07.754+00:00Hmm. Dismayed and resigned to
what one had hope wo...Hmm. Dismayed and resigned to<br />what one had hope would be so<br />much more. Written as if you<br />were stringing pearls.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256391836026637655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-57280230517898230232012-02-27T16:49:23.664+00:002012-02-27T16:49:23.664+00:00Alas first times are indeed sometimes a disappoint...Alas first times are indeed sometimes a disappointment - your fine words are not.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-27406241980621569992012-02-27T01:16:08.457+00:002012-02-27T01:16:08.457+00:00powerful. when conquest meets hope.powerful. when conquest meets hope.Man Named Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04299332753447389139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-86070609670611400812012-02-26T17:06:05.418+00:002012-02-26T17:06:05.418+00:00The difference in youthful expectations are portra...The difference in youthful expectations are portrayed so well..Anthony Ducehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17476865809734682418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-46857494292889575282012-02-26T04:11:45.436+00:002012-02-26T04:11:45.436+00:00Very nice with truth and revelations in every line...Very nice with truth and revelations in every line.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02399300464457820101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-1929084939196933162012-02-26T04:01:04.364+00:002012-02-26T04:01:04.364+00:00Good illustration of how the same experience is so...Good illustration of how the same experience is so different for those involved. This has a definite poignancy about it. Nicely written with a great finale.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-81921473252153981732012-02-26T03:51:52.526+00:002012-02-26T03:51:52.526+00:00Maybe I get this--as I understand, but do not iden...Maybe I get this--as I understand, but do not identify (although I read, and heard countless stories of the "conquest"-type Peeps. <br /><br />Foolish I...because always--even when drunk (I think)--my sole goal was to help my girl--who ever--feel loved, cared for, wanting more of tenderness time and extended time of lov...YOU get the picture.<br /><br />There must be many men who also enjoyed the 'giving' rather than the 'taking'? <br /><br />I was a loner--in drinking, and in loving, never hung around with guys bragging, etc. NEVER!<br /><br />This is not bragging, I just believe some Peeps are different. There were guys who "TALKED" about it--a lot! And then there were them who "DID" it. I have had a wonderful life.<br /><br />PEACE!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-62470052215685219992012-02-26T00:40:07.444+00:002012-02-26T00:40:07.444+00:00Striking image, and the poem really surpasses it i...Striking image, and the poem really surpasses it in evoking that heads-down feeling of illusions and innocence lost--very nicely done, Dulce.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-42149300785085427182012-02-25T23:59:53.761+00:002012-02-25T23:59:53.761+00:00I liked it on the first read, though not understan...I liked it on the first read, though not understanding it (being a barbarian and caveman), but liking the male-female tension and contrasts. Second time reading it, the meaning clicked, and yes, men and women are so different, opposites of the same coin, same experience, sharing the world but with a different understanding. The first time captures this polarity so vividly.Frank Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11512960953837979822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-35237667879871963552012-02-25T23:31:28.368+00:002012-02-25T23:31:28.368+00:00Why indeed...I can relate to your post ~
The las...Why indeed...I can relate to your post ~ <br /><br />The last line was a powerful close ~ Great take ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-47936706768370359132012-02-25T22:50:05.722+00:002012-02-25T22:50:05.722+00:00ugh, that close grips...and hurts a bit...i was ri...ugh, that close grips...and hurts a bit...i was right there in the moment as well...i wish all first times could be the glorious thing we sometimes make them out to be...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8880623420492155399.post-45991297086224275232012-02-25T22:04:20.005+00:002012-02-25T22:04:20.005+00:00ugh...happens all the time i guess...maybe the guy...ugh...happens all the time i guess...maybe the guys get a bit more sensitive with role models changing and the girls a bit more careful...love how you captured this dulce..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com