Apart from all this I seize
I am all this I dream
The cracked walls
In the messy dirty
wet house
the aggressive rough
huge wave
the shaky unprotected
narrow staircase
the dirt
the naked
the blind
and that guy
who ignores
and avoids me
day and night
8 comments:
not a whole lot of fun being avoided, esp in your own house...smiles...interesting textures in this...the cracked walls and stair case..
Material things and dreams, dreams which save us from dangers, deceptions and sadness.
Cracked walls, aggressive waves, the frightening staircase... and, most of all, that human being who could save you but didn't.
A concise, sharp and realistic portrait of woman's life, no "dulce" at all, on the contrary very, very bitter.
:)
My dear friends,
thans for commenting on this...
But I must tell you- this has so much more to do with bewilderment and enlightenment than sadness... for dreams i've learnt have such a say in our eveyday search for understanding and accepting and growing...
we all of it, all that we project and all that we take in.
The words remind of days captured in an environment you know you would someday have to leave. I felt this. I lived this. Well done…
It feels a little like the house is about to fall apart. Sense of doubt, not helped by feelings of vulnerability and mention of feeling ignored.
I think it's about seeing things clearly, and clearly not liking what you're seeing. A challenging read.
Apart from all those things, is life really that bad? In 4 or 5 weeks, summer vacation...let the parties begin, and the good times roll!
You can dream of a dry home, repaired, painted walls, a wide spiral staircase, etc.
And quickly replace
that proud asshole
who avoids, ignores
and probably snores.
Surely he is not
the 'Adam' to your 'Eve'.
LOVE and PEACE, Dulce!
xo
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