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Tuesday, November 27

clearing





blue senses awaken
surrounding
a dark soul
it’s 
that hole 
in the sky
widening
while 
the rain shivers
and 
fades away




Joining d'verse tonight

Image: Green Dreams - Original Art Oil Painting On Canvas  by 


11 comments:

Brian Miller said...

ah love the sense of relief i get in this...and always great to see you dulce....

Dulçe ♥ said...

You are a love, my dear!
thank you always!

steveroni said...

Love the picture...and the positive-sounding words!

I like the widening hole in the sky. Moon is showing brightly tonight!

Hi, Dulce!

Claudia said...

the hole in the sky widening while the rain fades away...this is beautiful...the shivering rain image...i like much

Laurie Kolp said...

I like the image of rain shivering.

ayala said...

the hole in the sky widening while the rain shivers...love this line. :)

Unknown said...

Love the opening of the sky, takes away that closed in feeling the early nights can bring :)

Timoteo said...

Short but sweet--the best poetry often is!

henry clemmons said...

The senses of blue! I love that. Plus I love the art. Your voice is awesome. Okay, I luved it all!

Unknown said...

Gorgeous!

A Plain Observer said...

we have been having many of those days withou the opening in the sky. I get a sense of hope, relief in this.