Just the rhythm of our souls
...
...
I’ll be your sun
Even though the day is done.
This is here for eternity.
You are so delicate
I am so fragile.
We bathe in moistened
Pure water,
Fragrant oils...
This togetherness
All of a sudden
This spring
This warmth.
No need to prove
We love each other
One more than the other.
When you touch me
I am filled
And words need not
To be uttered
But, do, please
Whisper it again.
25 comments:
What a sweet and tender dedication to the object of our love. Enjoyed this one. Love fills me now.
Joy always,
Susan
True Love indeed :)
Yes...
tears of the sky fall to the ground
Yes indeed..."please whisper it again."
smiles. i like whispers....a lovely love you paint
Dulce--WHEW!
Soul-rhythm,
Bright at night
Something about 'eternal"?
do not talk--but say it again, whispering.
This one not so deep..........
PEACE!
yes, do, do, please, just whisper it one more time! beautiful, lady!!! very yummy! shhhh......whispering........
;)
you know, i'm off again on a road trip so am able to be in and out only sporadically - please know i do come and read whether or not i am able to leave a little note! ;)
A tender soft piece on true love.
Beautiful!
You have writen this so beautifully, Dulce. Your words evoke tenderness and the fragility.
a lovely romance! steven
Beautiful! And we all, really, want to hear it aloud, don't we?
Rick
Great poem. So true… We do want to hear it again and again.
The power of spoken and unspoken words, and the insatiability of the human need one for another. You have captured it beautifully, sensually. Nice.
very romantic!
so much delicate poem :) sentimenents in the air :)
I've been doing a study on my blog 'Reasearch On True Love'....this tops it. I'm sooo impressed. Amazingly done!
Can the words of the lover ever be whispered too often?
So sweetly said :)
I only have one word, Dulce... Wow!
so lovely - that beginning sucked me right in.
Romantic, intuitive, gripping, excellent.
Dulce
I agree
no proof should be needed
but so nice to hear it anyway
~rick
Such a tender, loving poem. I feel its sweet intensity.
such is love...we dont need to prove it, it is there, it is felt, yet it is so good hear those words
A beautiful poem...loved it! 'when you touch me I am filled' mmmm... :)
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