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Tuesday, September 27

itchy

lying here on the grass
   you and I
not like in those dreamy films
this grass is high
and there are hoppers
and other bugs
but we are together
   at last
our children are not playing around
for we have none
and the silence is broken
by the cars passing by
   now and then
and you are not perfect
   I am angry about that
.
but you are amazed by this hill
and the few trees, leaves and bees
and so much you need  to kiss me
and give and that I forget and relax
   and enjoy this bliss of us
disturbed only by this sweet breeze 
   now.


______________________________________________________Posted for D’verse
Image > wild things - number 2 by Dorit


20 comments:

Pat Hatt said...

Wonderful scene you set, truly your own, nothing like those dreamy films you state, nicely done!

steveroni said...

And also not like those films...itchy loving.

Grass so tall
hiding all
from all

Scarlet said...

So nice to forget being angry and get a kiss.. enjoyed this sweet post ~

author.nara.malone said...

It's real, but still dreamy. Your poem is like a photo, the images are so clear to me.

Claudia said...

ah this is beautiful dulce...the imperfectness of the scenery makes the poem all the more perfect...i for my part - perfect people make me highly suscpicious...i love imperfectness....a lot...smiles

Jannie Funster said...

I've got one who is not always perfect either, but I open my heart to him when I get over my anger too.

Oh and wow -- I just looked over and I see you have me in "Blogs To Enjoy." How sweet!! Thank you for your kindness, Dulce of the sweet sweeter life!

xoxo

ayala said...

sweet and dreamy.

Unknown said...

It wasn't like those dreamy films, but I almost can smell the scent of the grass after reading your itchy but relaxing post.

Tashtoo said...

Love is found when imperfection is embraced, accepted, forgiven. A wonderful share!

Brian Miller said...

nothing else matter when you can get lost in each other like that....and none of us are perfect, but love can still prevail...

Ann Grenier said...

Lovely scene and sentiments you paint in this poem, enjoyed it much.

Anthony Duce said...

Enjoyed this very much.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

I love it, particularly,

you are not perfect
I am angry about that

Adura Ojo said...

I get the feeling that what matters is this moment. Lovely and dreamy.

Aphrodite said...

Touching... I especially felt deep these verses:
"for we have none
and the silence is broken
by the cars passing by
now and then"
Beautifully written :)

Anonymous said...

I hate bugs, Dulce, but I want to be that guy right now...... wow........... and yes, no guy is perfect, at least not without you gals....

A Plain Observer said...

Isn't that just the best Dulce? Forgetting to be angry, enjoying a peaceful moment so in touch with nature even if the cars are passing by

Unknown said...

lovely image, pulled me right into the field. ~ Rose

hedgewitch said...

Most charming and very well arranged to draw the reader in. I was smiling through the entire piece.

Dulçe ♥ said...

Thank you all and each one of you for your so very nice comments!

Dulce
:-)
<3