There comes a time
when we wonder
what is it
I like about you
.
.
you about me…
.
It’s then when
the answers pend in the sky
as floating stars
As ageless as aside
It’s then when
those sleep-filled thoughts
remain in god’s hands
out of our control
.
for we’ve learnt the way to adore
treasure and never scorn
not afraid to talk
touch and close
our eyes
.
meeting in the moon.
_____________
15 comments:
What a delicate & intimate cosmic poem, Dulce!
I have nominated you to The Versatile Blogger Award (check the right side of my Blog)
Best wishes and thanks for sharing your poetry.
:)
"It’s then when
the answers pend in the sky
as floating stars" all so exquisitely expressed dear Dulce...beautiful writing, thank you.
what we learnt in good times will help us later when things are not going so well...meeting on another level..be it the moon or wherever - sounds like a good plan..
So big Love can get to be...
Thanks my dear friends for your sweet comments :-) ♥ ♥ ♥
Hey Dulce...as I read this...it flowed like a song...a heart song....my heart song....beautiful...wishing you a happy thanksgiving...the best one yet. ☺☺
you know...i have learned there are some things that are just now explainable...and there are times when like is not the best gauge...but we can talk and touch...we going to be alright...
Reminds me at the end of the day in a familiar room of reconnecting and making the wonders again go away. Enjoyed.
Those sleep-filled thoughts, in God's Hands. If ever a dream could be more sweet, it must come from God!
Then, meeting in that light of night. Stroking and stoking..HEY! It sounds like I'm inspired here to write my own poem--grin!
Be wise, be well, be good, Dulce-Girl!
I would say, Dear Dulce, this sounds like a marriage question. To me anyway. And answered so sweetly.
xoxo
I would say, Dear Dulce, this sounds like a marriage question. To me anyway. And answered so sweetly.
xoxo
I missed being here and reading those sweet posts of you, they are always heart-warming.
Thanks for commenting and thanks for sharing this.
You write beautifully (havent told you that in a while)
Happy Rally!
Left in Gods' hands the truth and the goodness
of all relationships grow. Your poem is divine
you've captured the delicate bond between two
people - exquisite.
Después de una larga ausencia, regreso...un placer leerte de nuevo. Besos!!
A very appealing poem Dulce...
Its wonderful....
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