It’s feathers
Silky
So gentle and smooth
Soothing
Subtly stroking my chin
My cheeks, then
My humid lips
.
.
And I wake up
To find you there
Caressing me here
.
With your mild
.
Sweet
Sweet
Fingertip.
__________
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Happy Valentine' s day to everyone!
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17 comments:
Dulce, your writing rates with the best of these offerings so wonderfully attracted to dVerse.
NO one could write so well of love without having...or having had great
passion in her life. Superior!
Thank you. And Happy Valentine's Day to you, Sweetest!
(I thought 'here' and 'there' were in reverse order--on purpose? ;)
Sweetly sensuous. :)
YES! Steve!
How...? hmmmm, you clever analyst of my work...
I did change that on purpose.. must be I feel nearer myself these days ;-)
♥
Thanks Nara for your comment - yes sensous is a word to describe it and sweet, of course :-)
soft as a feather...that is a gentle kinda love...love that intimacy dulce....hope you are enjoying your valentine....
So intimate with every word, a moment many would want to last. Nicely written!
Lovely and tender write! Beautifully done!
@AudreyHowitt
I love it...very nice and sweet ~
Happy Hearts Day to you ~
Simple and lovely, Dulce, and of course, sweet words.
Dulce!! First of all I really admire your language economy, your use of the exact words in the exact order to evoque the exact feelings. I wish you had a nice valentine's day.
And I also want to say you thanks for the little presents you left on my blog, I really apreciate your words!
Yo también digo "chacha, tía!!" así que me da la impresión de que vivimos más cerca de lo que pensaba!!
un beso jovenzuela y muchas gracias.
Sensual and soft ~ нαρρу ναℓєηтιηє'ѕ ∂αу ♥ нєℓєηα
Valentines Day is over for us but nevertheless I wish you, sweetest :)
Lovely poem that is feathery to read and smooth to imagine. Loved it.
Joy always,
Susan
Perfect poem for the day.
this is just lovely dulce...so tender and of warm sensuality... happy valentine's to you!
This is lovely, Dulce :) Hope you had a great Valentine's Day!
Poema sensual y bonito, con una imagen que tambiéne s preciosa. Un beso.
Wow! What a beautiful and pow!erful poem. Sucker punched at how it ended. Loved loved loved it.
Awww! so cute. love the pic too <3
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