I take it
you are wandering about me
messing my free moments up
I take it it’s for the sake of love
or obsession
a fixation
a compulsion
that wakes you up
if I’m not there
you won’t take it
and a blink is not enough
you need to play the whole game
over and over
until you get back
wandering about me.
9 comments:
Nice write!
cool pic...and i like that wandering line ~
wandering me...nice play on words...and why settle for a little when you can play the whole game...
Enjoyed
Wondering! OH! It's WANDERING! That IS an inspiration. Your excellence continues. What I'm liking these past few poems are succinctness--tightness?
And girl is pretty, all tied up, however loosely...
PEACE!
and a blink is not enough
you need to play the whole game
Anticipation
it;s making me wait ...
Neat lines.
Excellent write dulce...
LIKES!!!! Sounds kinda "stalkerish" lol
Loved the playfulness and the devotion here.
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