we belong
to the whispers
of the wind
and the haze
that floats
hiding
the sunset
to the hands
we hold
... to each other
15 comments:
Just taking in such a moment, greatly captured and brought to life.
it is the to each other that i find the most comfort...all we are is what we give away...
Hey! You posted. Congratulations! Verrry nice, Dulce. In fact, LOVELY!
So simple.
I don't write simple, but I LIKE simple
--I have one up also, #102...or 367, or some ungodly number--grin!
Like that Brian's comment. We do not 'give' to 'get'. BUT, when we 'give' we DO keep on 'getting'. That supply of replenishment never runs dry.
PEACE, Sweeter!
I do like this. Such a simple statement made, one I could live in.
Simply beautiful.
Lovely thoughts Dulce ~
Lovely! Is the art work yours as well? Love it!
Beautiful ! :)
Elegant comes to mind. An honest true write. Love the words, lines, and form. and your skill. A true pleasure!
Eloquent capture of a fleeting moment and emotion
Was I supposed to cry over that, 'cause I did a little, Dulce. Seems to include the whole universe in just a few words.
xoxo
Short, simple and so very special is this poem. One could carry it around almost, in one's hands, like a precious 'find'.
Like your words belong on the page....this is lovely Dulce!
I haven't visited in awhile, Dulce...and I know what I've been missing! This is just beautiful. I've been home from India for three weeks now and I want to go back.
We belong...to each other...such a beautiful poem Dulce, brief and condensed.
Post a Comment