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Tuesday, May 8

Moment or Momentum





Extreme enlightenment  
      frees the souls
     which visit the venue
       under no condition
            for long
.
To the creative
    a whole
to the ignorant
    a hole
.
Pending someone’s decision
     whose name is found
     near and on
          both poles
.
The daring
     call it forfeit
the timid
      a new sacrifice
.
No achievers
.
None conversant with
when it ends up
or if it ever does.
      ...
Posted for d'verse

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15 comments:

steveroni said...

There are signs to know when one is enlightened.

One is that you find yourself asking, "Is it I who am crazy, or is it everyone else?"

Glad to welcome you back (am I first here?) Sweeter-of-Sweeter Poetry!

Also thank you for color scheme and the header design of my blog--It has been a year and longer since any change! And I LOVE IT!
<3

Brian Miller said...

you do realize how big my smile was to see your name on the list...right...great to see you dulce...

To the creative
a whole
to the ignorant
a hole

really like that...and your similar stanza later...

enjoy your enlightenment, as you enlightened my day...

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Liked this poem and the wordplay therein. Great!

poemblaze said...

Yep. Brian pointed out the greatest stanza.

ayala said...

Lovely and so nice to see you again :)

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

Nice! And I am with Brian! Great sense of word play!

Scarlet said...

I like that last stanza...so true ~

Nice to see you Dulce ~

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Tashtoo said...

The creative~ a whole
to the ignorant~ a hole

Oh this brought a smirk to my face. Very clever and biting little stanza.

henry clemmons said...

To the creative, a whole. Loved that. Not everyone can see what the voice of a poem, for instance, sees. Enjoyed this much.

Dawn said...

I agree!

To the creative
a whole
to the ignorant
a hole

This poem has been enlightening this evening- thank you for sharing.

Matt D said...

This is very beautiful,
but I suppose I have to admit
to trusting in freedom and caprice ...

... I never could get the hang of enlightenment. ;)

S. Susan Deborah said...

Welcome Dulce. Missed you here. And whatte comeback.

Hope you've been well and happy.

The moment of momentum, I would say.

Joy always,
Susan

Anthony Duce said...

Enjoyed very much...

aguja said...

Dulce, I award you 'The Beautiful Blogger Award' for your inspirational poetry that comes from the soul. you may accept or reject this award. Look at my blog post to see what you have to do.
Congratulations!

aguja said...

Superb use of words - well chosen and brilliantly worked into your poem.