The answers pend in the sky
As floating stars
As ageless as aside
When the sleep-filled thoughts
Remain in your hands
Out of my control
Learnt the way to adore
Treasure and never scorn
Not afraid to talk
Touch and close
Our eyes
Meet in the moon
Tonight.
___________________________
Just before Dawn by Artmitten
13 comments:
nice...meeting in the moon (and even if it's just the eyes...) sounds terribly romantic...and i mean terribly in a very good and exciting way...smiles...nice!!!
but what was the question?
Let's meet in the moon--
see what transpires,
and shed some light
on these earthly desires
yes, like Claudia said this is terribly romantic!!! nice write
Our eyes
Meet in the moon
Tonight....a sweet poem!
learning the ways to adore can be a very beautiful thing...and i think that it is something truly learnt...
I look forward to the meeting in the moon ~
You make me long for such a room--
@AudreyHowitt
Great closing 'Meet in the moon/ tonight'
Meeting in the moon would surely be the best, as couples learn about one another.
HEy! Thanks a lot each and everyone for your wonderful comments!
:-)
(sigh!) You are writing extremely well during this period of winter's chill.
And a way to live is to dream, let go, learn to love, and fear not. To say nothing of "meeting in the moon tonight!" WOW!--grin!
Peace, Dulce
I SOOOOO missed your words! Kinda internet-less :-(
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