Extreme enlightenment
frees the souls
which visit the venue
under no condition
for long
.
To the creative
a whole
to the ignorant
a hole
.
Pending someone’s
decision
whose name is found
near and on
both poles
.
The daring
call it forfeit
the timid
a new sacrifice
.
No achievers
.
None conversant with
when it ends up
or if it ever does.
...
Posted for d'verse
15 comments:
There are signs to know when one is enlightened.
One is that you find yourself asking, "Is it I who am crazy, or is it everyone else?"
Glad to welcome you back (am I first here?) Sweeter-of-Sweeter Poetry!
Also thank you for color scheme and the header design of my blog--It has been a year and longer since any change! And I LOVE IT!
<3
you do realize how big my smile was to see your name on the list...right...great to see you dulce...
To the creative
a whole
to the ignorant
a hole
really like that...and your similar stanza later...
enjoy your enlightenment, as you enlightened my day...
Liked this poem and the wordplay therein. Great!
Yep. Brian pointed out the greatest stanza.
Lovely and so nice to see you again :)
Nice! And I am with Brian! Great sense of word play!
I like that last stanza...so true ~
Nice to see you Dulce ~
http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.ca/2012/05/moon.html
The creative~ a whole
to the ignorant~ a hole
Oh this brought a smirk to my face. Very clever and biting little stanza.
To the creative, a whole. Loved that. Not everyone can see what the voice of a poem, for instance, sees. Enjoyed this much.
I agree!
To the creative
a whole
to the ignorant
a hole
This poem has been enlightening this evening- thank you for sharing.
This is very beautiful,
but I suppose I have to admit
to trusting in freedom and caprice ...
... I never could get the hang of enlightenment. ;)
Welcome Dulce. Missed you here. And whatte comeback.
Hope you've been well and happy.
The moment of momentum, I would say.
Joy always,
Susan
Enjoyed very much...
Dulce, I award you 'The Beautiful Blogger Award' for your inspirational poetry that comes from the soul. you may accept or reject this award. Look at my blog post to see what you have to do.
Congratulations!
Superb use of words - well chosen and brilliantly worked into your poem.
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