Mujerblue by Beatriz Díez Muiño_________
Get me there
Where I should stand
Inside
This long story
Within
Endless tales
Not to entertain
Not even the child
In me
Oh please,
Give me that
So that it’s new
Or old
But
As if
I had forgotten
No matter how far
Or how dark
Give me a nice surprise
As if Christmas time
Give me a good reason
To start and not to
Fight against the stars.__________
Give me
Get me there
Give me that nice surprise
Get me there
Give me that nice surprise
Get me there
Where I should stand
Inside
This long story
Within
Endless tales
Not to entertain
Not even the child
In me
Me...
Me plus me
Two mes
Me too…
Two mes
Me too…
Yet.Not enough.
Oh please,
Give me that
So that it’s new
Or old
But
As if
I had forgotten
The difference...
No matter how far
Or how dark
.
And it does not matter because
The depth is black
And blue beside
The depth is black
And blue beside
Give me a nice surprise
As if Christmas time
Give me a good reason
To start and not to
Fight against the stars.
13 comments:
when times get tough, we need good reasons to fight against the stars...deep and heartfelt words dulce
well written. I truly enjoyed this poem. Thank you.
It's always tough to get where we want to be.The journey to it is a tough war of finding reasons.
Heartfelt and Deep!Can feel the turmoil inside.
Great work,Dulce!
Utopians will unite,
And take flight
With literary might
To alleviate plight.
A wonderful poem.
Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
wow, so insightful piece.
love the way you nail it,
killing talent to me.
Glad to visit today...
awards/treats 4 u
Happy Belated Thanksgiving.
you know...i knew you could not stay away...smiles....great to see you back dulce...and i can't believe you killed talent, now what are we going to do? smiles.
been some time and here you are with a lovely read as always. The lines:
"Me...
Me plus me
Two mes
Me too…"
were so sweet to read. I have never seen anyone say that. Me plus me . . . Now I wonder if I am two or one.
Joy always dear Dulce and happy to see you again.
~ Susan
Yeahhhhh. You're back. ☺ And reading this....echos what's in my heart..in my soul...in my bones....hugs to you Dulce...your journey inspires mine.
Son hermosas las sorpresas que da el amor...
Un beso.
Fighting is exhausting..Your writing must be a strong source of strength for you because it is
so strong honest yet humble and poetic too. .
Thank you for sharing Dulce xo
an oversight on my part, to be sure! i would have emailed you directly back, but your email is not enabled.
glad i stopped by, excellent read!
Dulce
A touching poem,,, glad you posted again,
joan
A lovely poem - and I notice you like Walt Whitman - as I do. Thanks for visiting my blog - more snow through the night! Arghhhhhhh!
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