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| Stepping Out In A Storm |
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Here in my shelter
Avoiding the open
By the window…
Gusts of hot wind
Transporting some substance
To my inner sins
Clouds of colors
I’ve never seen
Moving places
Out of scene
No lightning or thunder
Storms, not so strong
Must be just a gale
Or a squall
Drops of rain
Moved away
By annoyed breezes
And then this disquiet quietness
And then this breathless breathing
Atmospheric instability
With little or no precipitation
Taking me to no direction.
12 comments:
Now... something I should change...but too late.
This is a real thunderstorm with lots of rain!!!
Hiding in my bed
:0
Love your new blog design... and of course your poetry is always the BEST! Hugs from afar xoxoxoxo
When the moon travels away, the waves lessen, this was slowly killing the planet!
It was appropriate for nuns to stay celibate, so they would pine, and with help, love the orphans of the world!
A beautiful poem by a caring person.
Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Sigh.
Understand weird weather in Canaries today. Windy wind, blowing everything and scary. Will go away.
Nature is life. Calm, storm almost chaos, again then calm.
At the end, all is well.
I like. If I did not like it would yet be good!
Be Dulce.
C
Nature just brings words to our hearts...So weird or amazing that it just cant be left unsaid
you know...there are days i wish i could just hole up in bed...weather or otherwise...but sounds like you have some interesting weather on your hands today...
Hmmmm. Now I have started a blog, feeling more in sync with everyone here. The girl in the snow, finally it is winter. Attractive lead photo
Your depiction of Der Sturm is amazingly accurate, using words I have never seen put together. Wonder were you frightened? I hear rain beating on the glass. I shudder to hear in near shock, thunder. Blinding lightning.
Possible all is quiet now? Sun is shining? I may begin to read and comment, using your side area for a start with your permission.
Thank you for being my number 1 comment! I like
Great piece!! I also love the look of your blog and I forgot to tell you that you have the greatest profile pic. : ))
yeah..same feeling here Dulce..i wish i just curl in bed..but memories would curl with you no matter where..they are this FRIENDLY..:))
love your poem..always delighted to read you my sweet friend..:)
abrazitos Querida
:))
Beautiful new blog design. Beautiful words to match :)
Gusts of hot wind
Transporting some substance
To my inner sins
Now that got my attention.
Always good,bravo
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