Times we had
when the grass
was greener
when
looking for
was
finding
Spots showed up
before our smiles
Times we had
when that dark
side of the moon
was
meaningless
and the light
was
brighter
the taste
much sweeter
Times we had
times we shared
and at them we laughed
now gone
but the applause
we still hear
Still here
Here still
Inspired by listening to Pink Floyd today.
6 comments:
This is dual-comment posting:
"That dark side of the moon was meaningless" HA! Had some of those myself!
This line is the "classic" IMO:
"..but the applause
we still hear
Still here
Here still
Dulce you are getting back "in the groove" PLEASE keep writing when even a few minutes are available. GOOD poem. Thank you
smiles....glad you can still hear the applause...and hopefully those days are never fully gone...just different you know...smiles...
always great to see you dulce...
and could def feel the pink floyd influence...smiles.
I like the refraining lines of the taste, much sweeter are the memories ~
Nice to read you again Dulce ~
I hope all is well ~
nice...love your pink floyd inclusion...and cool wordplay at the end with the still hear, still here...here still...the good thing is that there's continuous movement and the moon and the sun play on and on...happy friday dulce...
You are always wonderful, still here, here still, lovely Dulce.
Beautiful dear Dulce!
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