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Sunday, January 1

12 ideas or so

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Life has brought me to this climax
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My dreams talk to me
and I listen
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My attitude warns me
so I move back
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So many new years
 full of unfulfilled resolutions
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And again it’s now
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The time to start it all over again
With a difference
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The soup I’ll take and enjoy
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And my bright consciousness
Lighting the path
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A new old existence
Full of seeds to be watered
To be cherished and let grow.
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Tuesday, June 8

A CHOICE



How many

Imaginary monsters

Remain filed in my mind

Taking away from me

The pleasure to live

Destroying my dreams…


Has it been the way

I’ve faced it all?


Rejections, mistakes

Failures, losses

Instead of maturity

What did that bring?


Guilt suffocated me

So many times

When will I get over that?


My beauty, my youth

My sweetness, my innocence

Where has it all gone?


It vanished with the time

As I contemplated and complained

It’s all their fault


While I observed

And moaned

Time flies


And so the weight of the past

The fear of the future

The unawareness of the present

Won the battle of my existence.


But somehow for some reason

Here I am

Still able to write

And share it

With those of you

Who came by.


It’s not all that black.


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Tuesday, January 5

How Weak Was She?



And she collapsed...

The girl

The woman

The lady

The goddess

She believed...


She failed herself

Just by chance

After that so quick glance

For seeing him...


He ignored her

And so did she

But he saw her

As well as so did she.


Inside the huge mall

Of her heart

She lost control

Beating at an unarmed speed

Unaware she could breathe


The glance

By chance


And everything

She had declined

Vanished as ash

In the wind


And because of that

She will be

Once more back

To dreaming

Asleep or awake

All the same

About his smile

His voice

His image

His look

His figure


Yes- just a dream

But this not welcome return

She discerns...

How well she knows herself

She’ll have to start it all over again

An end well deserved

Awaits him

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Same place.

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© Dulce

Saturday, October 3

FEEDBACK





Last Saturday I posted some pics of a small part of my house and got astonished at how successful they were among my friends. Never before had I got 16 comments on a Saturday! Those photos are special to me but, so normal and bare!? Taken with my mobile! Yet, thank you so much for those beautiful comments. You people are great.

My fave of the week was AGE VISION, which came up just by saying to myself “The old man…” I loved so much your comments on it. Wow!


On the right you can see some pictures of the actual house I wrote SOLITARY “for”. It’s a very decrepit old house which has attracted my attention ever since I was a child, for its solitude and beautiful surroundings. Lucky me I can go and visit it whenever I want- every time I go for a walk near my house (less than a mile away…) Again photos taken with my super mobile!


BUBBLES I wrote thinking about you my friends, because of that LOVE which has actually grown between you and I… It’s like bubbles, subtly tangible. Some of you are really special to me (you know who YOU are, so no need to mention). Except for the one living at the bottom of my nearest continent- most of you are on the other side of the Atlantic… (I haven’t forgotten the English or the Australians, right?…)


FUNNY DATE I wrote mainly because I am so fed up with my not getting a date these days… and especially because this week, in class with some of my students- we’ve been reading about Speed Dating. And I thought…well, in my case it’s “Self- Dating”, and that poem was born…


On Thursday I took a rest and yesterday I had no idea what to write in 55 words- I always like it to be fun and at the same time thought provoking. Although I’ve been to therapy a couple of times, these true dreams I’ve interpreted myself… for something I’ve got to know about this one I live within…

Again I’ve loved the comments, especially those of Shay… So that’s why I’m also posting a poem today!


This goes to my special blog-friends who, for different reasons, seem to be openly concerned about Death. Curiously their names all start with ‘S’…


UNTITLED


Are you afraid?

That’s typical, so pray


Where do they go

After passing away?

Do they fly

Do they get any sleep?

Or is it all they do?


Are they near here?

Gone with God?

Or are they themselves

Gods and Goddesses?


Are they cold, depressed?

Or are they so happy

That just can’t say?


Are they old or young?


Whatever they do

Wherever they are

No answer I get


Yet, my sixth sense

Keeps telling me

That must be a nice place

Where no-one ever rests…

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©Dulce