To G-Man
Walking down the street
She looked up
and saw him, by the window
He saw her down there too
A glimpse and another
A smile
Both full of words
of desire
'Shall I tell her to wait?'
'Shall I wink at him and wave my hand?'
Neither did.
Love flew away
in just a second.
© Dulce Rosales
20 comments:
Every time you can
take the life and run.
MaxEgb
Ahhh yes..."If Only".
One never knows does one.?
Excellent 55 My Dear.
Thank you so very much for this fine contribution, and please join us again next week....Galen
damn, what happened to happy endings, heee heeee heeeee
No happy endings in brief poetry. Sooooorry
With you humans everything seems to be about love, even walking down the street.
Does make a great 55 though.
Our is up
HERE.
It can so easily be gone.
Awww, too bad. Maybe they'll get a chance again later.
sorrowfully sweet
it makes me want to morn what could have been -- or at least think about it.
well done indeed!
smiles,
Thank you for stopping by my corner of the blogsphere. Please come often and leave a few words. I'm delighted to hear you enjoy my writing -- the compliment is mutual my friend.
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Beautiful - thank you fr visiting me. Of course you may add me, I will definitely do the same!
Dagnabit, another missed opportunity.
Good 55 however!
Aren't we glad since their spouses might not appreciate another love. Better it should fly away.
Great 55
Mine is posted
HERE.
thanks a lot you all for your comments.
i'm really glad for them,for it, for taking and being part of all this-our blogging incredible world :-) I LOVE YOU!
Opportunities fly away if you are hesitant . We must learn to grab when we can.
ah, more moments slipped past. Tragic. ~rick
ouch!!!.....
Lovely writing. Yes, we all have regrets about opportunities lost.
My Flash 55 is HERE.
Very nice capture of the missed opportunity.
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so many beautiful feelings died due to lack of courage or initiative
How often this must happen in life! For several years now I take EVERY opportunity to speak, to get to know, strangers.
Today 8/16/09 was one example. I told a lady "what a pretty baby boy!"
She said, "It's a girl!" OooooH! We ended up talking for 15 minutes, and she showed me which camera to buy, through her experiences, good and bad
Many strangers are just WAITING to be spoken to...after all, we ARE all ONE. Yes, all one, one day you will know that.
Peace!
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