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Wednesday, June 2

Delectation




You crave for my mouth and voice.


I hunger for your sleek laugh.


You are longing to caress

with your smooth lips..

My loveliness

My nose

Sovereign of my arrogant face.

Hey, Ok.


I need to eat , lick your skin

Start by your fingertips and then

Then.


Nakedly beautiful

Our bodies flow

And gather

In the warmth

The depth

So sweet, so pure.


This brightness,

Pouring

Out of you and me.


You are burning inside

And so am I.


We embrace the enthusiasm

And the exhaustion

Of our delectation.

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Partly inspired and adapted from Neruda’s Love Poems

24 comments:

A Daft Scots Lass said...

soopa sensual and hawt!

Toni M.M. said...

Meow!
What a poem for such a scorchy and sultry weather!

Sweating right now!!

Peace On You!! (LOL)

JStar said...

Sexy!

Anonymous said...

Ooo la la. Very sensual. :)

Barbara von Enger said...

This piece reminds me of a summer, erotic love affair - burning with passion and fire. X

Anonymous said...

Oh my God!!!

Scorching day, sensual poem, sexual cravings, hot weather and everybody sweating... pleeeeeease!
Give me some lemonade with ice ... I need something fresh to recover!!!

Bravo!! Sexy poem full of... FIRE

Juan Ramón

steveroni said...

Dulce, have you not observed that today is "Wordless Wednesday"? I thought not. And you have named it THE RETURN OF EROS WEDNESDAY!

I am so grateful this is not "Thoughtless Wednesday" because--well, because--grin!

You have beautifully exceeded the boundaries of ordinary word and thought here.

Who of anybody has never experienced craving, hunger, anticipation, longing, flowing, needing, the outside bright and inside burning?

And you used a word which is my all-time favorite, ENTHUSIASM! I will say this "poem" is unforgettable.

I'd say you are STILL the "Sweetest Poet"...

Love ya, Peep!

Adelina said...

No me extraña que estén ardiendo, es muy sensual y apasionado el poema.

Un beso.

Anonymous said...

"we embrace the enthusiasm and the exhaustion" lovely.....bkm

Jingle said...

very passionate poem...
thanks for sharing!

GYPSYWOMAN said...

always the bold and the beautiful over here, lady! great piece!!!

Brian Miller said...

going to go take a shower now...cold.

Nikki (Sarah) said...

passionate as always.... :)

Katherine Krige said...

Love your blog heading. Love the post. Definitely Hot! Sweet.

steveroni said...

Hey it is time for your "55" Canarie Girl!

steveroni said...

Remember to Breath.....

Patricia Gold said...

Yo te recuerdo lo de tu amigo o amiga, es VIERNESSS!!! y encima yo no termino con mis cosas hasta tarde.
Se pusieron de acuerdo, todos escriben sobre lo mismo y tengo que concentrarme en un exámen..:(
No se cómo!..
"I need to eat , lick your skin"

Esta frase me puede...y hacerlo también jajaja.
Miles de besos y te deseo un hermos fin de semana.

Rebecca said...

Loved it all the way through. :)

Lu Ann said...

Wow!

Such a profound declaration of yours hun!!

Ileana said...

Is it getting hot in here or is it just me? lol

¡Que bueno te quedo, Chica! xo

Angeles said...

Cómo te ha inspirado Neruda!!
Estos sensuales te salen especialmente especiales!!
Buen finde!!
Besos:)

Sam Liu said...

The fiery passion in this poem is really quite breathtaking, Dulce...as always, you capture a raw and intimate sensuality in your words, as you describe two bodies that, like a golden liquid, seamlessly interact and dance with each other. Great piece :)

Sheri said...

well, WELL! i'm feeling a little like a voyeur but with my hands over my eyes so as to give you the privacy you need. something tells me you wouldn't notice me anyways ;)
this was beautiful...

SILVIA said...

Adoro tus versos, me saben a gloria. Besillos!!