You crave for my mouth and voice.
I hunger for your sleek laugh.
You are longing to caress
with your smooth lips..
My loveliness
My nose
Sovereign of my arrogant face.
Hey, Ok.
I need to eat , lick your skin
Start by your fingertips and then
Then.
Nakedly beautiful
Our bodies flow
And gather
In the warmth
The depth
So sweet, so pure.
This brightness,
Pouring
Out of you and me.
You are burning inside
And so am I.
We embrace the enthusiasm
And the exhaustion
Of our delectation.
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Partly inspired and adapted from Neruda’s Love Poems
24 comments:
soopa sensual and hawt!
Meow!
What a poem for such a scorchy and sultry weather!
Sweating right now!!
Peace On You!! (LOL)
Sexy!
Ooo la la. Very sensual. :)
This piece reminds me of a summer, erotic love affair - burning with passion and fire. X
Oh my God!!!
Scorching day, sensual poem, sexual cravings, hot weather and everybody sweating... pleeeeeease!
Give me some lemonade with ice ... I need something fresh to recover!!!
Bravo!! Sexy poem full of... FIRE
Juan Ramón
Dulce, have you not observed that today is "Wordless Wednesday"? I thought not. And you have named it THE RETURN OF EROS WEDNESDAY!
I am so grateful this is not "Thoughtless Wednesday" because--well, because--grin!
You have beautifully exceeded the boundaries of ordinary word and thought here.
Who of anybody has never experienced craving, hunger, anticipation, longing, flowing, needing, the outside bright and inside burning?
And you used a word which is my all-time favorite, ENTHUSIASM! I will say this "poem" is unforgettable.
I'd say you are STILL the "Sweetest Poet"...
Love ya, Peep!
No me extraña que estén ardiendo, es muy sensual y apasionado el poema.
Un beso.
"we embrace the enthusiasm and the exhaustion" lovely.....bkm
very passionate poem...
thanks for sharing!
always the bold and the beautiful over here, lady! great piece!!!
going to go take a shower now...cold.
passionate as always.... :)
Love your blog heading. Love the post. Definitely Hot! Sweet.
Hey it is time for your "55" Canarie Girl!
Remember to Breath.....
Yo te recuerdo lo de tu amigo o amiga, es VIERNESSS!!! y encima yo no termino con mis cosas hasta tarde.
Se pusieron de acuerdo, todos escriben sobre lo mismo y tengo que concentrarme en un exámen..:(
No se cómo!..
"I need to eat , lick your skin"
Esta frase me puede...y hacerlo también jajaja.
Miles de besos y te deseo un hermos fin de semana.
Loved it all the way through. :)
Wow!
Such a profound declaration of yours hun!!
Is it getting hot in here or is it just me? lol
¡Que bueno te quedo, Chica! xo
Cómo te ha inspirado Neruda!!
Estos sensuales te salen especialmente especiales!!
Buen finde!!
Besos:)
The fiery passion in this poem is really quite breathtaking, Dulce...as always, you capture a raw and intimate sensuality in your words, as you describe two bodies that, like a golden liquid, seamlessly interact and dance with each other. Great piece :)
well, WELL! i'm feeling a little like a voyeur but with my hands over my eyes so as to give you the privacy you need. something tells me you wouldn't notice me anyways ;)
this was beautiful...
Adoro tus versos, me saben a gloria. Besillos!!
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