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Friday, June 25

Write - 55




Write to me

Press the keys

And tell me


State, utter

Explain


Any word you expressed

I’d receive

As the best present

Indeed


Write to me

Any sentence

Any statement

Any phrase

So I can discern

What in your mind

You ruminate


Write to me

Any noun, any verb

Adjective or adverb

I’ll know

You’ll have drawn up

Regarding me


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26 comments:

Shadow said...

sa-weeeet!

Kay said...

oh, me like. It is so nice to receive a letter, directed to just you, knowing you are on the mind of another... no matter how small.

absolutely love it! (reminds me how I should be writing some letters right now)... haha

Anonymous said...

Faaaannnntastic my friend. :) Well done!!!

S. Susan Deborah said...

Give me your address dearest and I will write to you . . .

I still write letters and enjoying doing so.

I loved these lines, so simple and sweet. Just like a gentle tune within.

Have a glorious weekend dear Dulce,
Susan

John (@bookdreamer) said...

Are you ready for dictation...Mine is mere demonic temptation in this week's 55!

Anonymous said...

It's been so long since I've received an actual hand written letter... ah, the days of technology. Love your 55, so sweet and meaningful. Have a great weekend Dulce dearest. Hugs!

Nevine Sultan said...

I write to you, Sweetest Dulce, and say, I love your words, love your mind, love your thoughts.

Simple and sweet, this one.

Have a beautiful weekend!!! :-)

Nevine

Jessie said...

i so love this!!! :-)
sweet writings here and hopefully from someone special to you...
warm smiles for you always,

Anonymous said...

What mystery will have the words? With them we can communicate, express our feelings, talk, discuss, express our emotions and sometimes play with them to make something as beautiful as a poem.

Thank you very much for using the words so beautifully.

Dress to kill!

steveroni said...

Hey Dulce! have a smoke, a glass of vino, sit back, and read all these letters (comments).

You write here another winner. Never disappointing, your posts, always fun, sometimes provocative. I would not miss ever a single one.
Take Care O Dulce!

Alice Audrey said...

Excellent.

I've felt that way a time or two.

JStar said...

:) Nice 55!

Monkey Man said...

There are no remarks sweet enough to show full appreciation for this tasty 55. My 55 is HERE .

Maude Lynn said...

Nicely done!

G-Man said...

Dulce...
This was fantastic.
You write to the Soul.
It's always a treat visiting you.
Thank you for this masterpiece.
Thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen

Angeles said...

Una señal...a veces tan necesaria para comprender.
Muy bueno!! como siempre.

Estoy un poco complicada en general y entre otras cosas mi ordenador no funciona, estoy usando el de mi marido que es su herramienta de trabajo así que por el momento estaré de a ratos... pero siempre...
Besos:)

Desert Rose said...

Amazing Dulce! i loved it..yeah..any word would fit!..just a nod even..;)

Sam Liu said...

Such a true observation, Dulce...how often we long for the other person to simply tell us all their thoughts, to allow us to delve deep within their mind. Truly a poignant idea, and so beautifully expressed. Plus, you did it in only 55 words, you continue to amaze! :D

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

good job!

The Girl With The Mousy Hair said...

Dear Dulce,
I would gladly write to everyday and tell you how much I enjoy visiting your words.

Best wishes
Kerrie xxx

Blogoratti said...

Very nice...i like*

RNSANE said...

Beautiful, Dulce. It is so easy to talk to you, I would imagine you would have a million responses to your lovely poetic invitation.

Yours is such a special take on Flash 55!

Anonymous said...

I like...

Wait. What? said...

I really enjoy what you do here, please don't stop.
<3

CJ said...

Thanks for this beautiful poetic reminder to be in touch with friends, family, and YOU.

Thanks for stopping by my blog, or rather "BLOB" today. I've been so busy, that I have occasionally posted but I haven't been good about checking up on others' blogs or leaving comments. As soon as I complete a big project, I think I'll have time to do that, but then I dive into something else and, well, I just lose touch. I thought when I retired I'd have loads of time, but now I wonder how I ever found the time to be employed.

I love your poems and, as an artist, I especially enjoy the art you add as illustrations.

Wild Rose said...

Your poetry is beautiful Dulce your images even better such as sweet blog. Will try to stop by more often :)

Wild Rose~