Stop standing
Go
Leave
Set off
Fly and smile
At the air
The barking dogs and loving cats.
Stop lying down
Get up
and walk
Much further than
To the other side
Of your cosy home
Notice the outside
Don’t be afraid to shine
Come to yourself
And back to you
That bare you
See and realize
You are that much
And much more
Than that
How come?
Dance your passion
In all those fashions
That only you know
And thought you forgot
Visit your place
And cry tears
Of consciousness
Your favourite ones
And smile
Smile
Even your silly smile
They say it shines
I guess
They must be right.
Yet, of course
No need to state
No need to throw away
The rose…
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16 comments:
Oh, Darling! Breathtaking as usual!
This poem gives me positive vibrations, you know?
Sometimes we must left monotony and go outside: there's a world with open arms, waiting for you and your soul.
Here's my Sunday's positive thinking:
"The best and the most valuable things in the world can not be seen or even touched. They must be felt with the heart". H. Keller (she was blind and deaf)
Lots of love,
Toni
dearest dulce, you tempt me with your words, enticing me to the freedoms of really grabbing this life of mine and living it, perhaps for the first time? and so, i shall...even if it appears that i am merely taking baby steps in the eyes of those who find it so easy to critique me...
this work was a stunning piece!
You always are just bursting with emotion...
And it explodes beautifully!!!
Hey there, "emotionally bursting girl" (thanks, G-Man!)...it is truly great to see you back exploding beautifully--as always.
Peace!
... And smile, smile for ever!!!
Besos mil!!
Very timely for where I am at just now in recovery. And stated in such an interesting manner.
and smiles back to you, dulce!!!
Hiiii Darling,
Well, let me say that you're sensitive, passionate, dreamy, enthusiastic, excited and most of times... very sweet. I'm sure you'll have everything you expect, for being so special.
By the way, Toni (my dear pilgrim), I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw this incredible thinking. Certainly it's a great idea and much better advice. That's called a spirit of struggle and overcoming.
C U (The President)
Such an uplifting, joyous poem, Dulce. How wonderful to escape reality and allow yourself to soar, to be truly free and to feel the wind on your back. And, of course, to smile, to be care-free, if only for a moment. A powerful and beautiful ideal, so wonderfully expressed here.
I loved this poem. It is so sweet, so beautiful. Thank you!
Something we all need to remember to do...especially when we are so stuck in our self-indulgent pity :)
There is a beautiful life out there that needs to be experienced, embraced and appreciated. So often we forget to do this and just focus on the "bad"...as if we actually want to because really it is so easy to find the beauty.
Thanks for putting life into perspective and making me feel more uplifted today :)
I miss "visiting" you, but i have been so busy. New job, new place.
Ohhh...so delicious.
BTW...I got the Bee photo back that I sent to you!!! Not sure what I did wrong with address. Can you send me your info again? So sorry...
How life should be lived. And yet, can we live it this way? Sort of like creating a perfect fancies. There are always borders. But are these borders real, or we only see them because we choose to? I have yet to discover that. But at least, someone somewhere is happy, and maybe now it's you. And when you are happy, do not let philosophy reach you, just be happy.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. :) excellent ;)
Dance your passion - love that. you always make me think...it's ok to trust...and not only to love...but to be loved. Thank you for this.... ☺
The better way to Break with the routine and the stagnation that may our lives become is by living happy, smiling, loving, taking a chance, just living it. Great words.
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