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Now I know
Withhold its meaning
What it represents
Now I’ve got it
Don’t need revision
Or extension, for
Now I know
There is no need
To feel that anguish
Or that eager passion
Painful disappointments...
Now I know
It’s real
It’s for me here
To keep and conceive
No need to constantly
Pray for a miracle
A ‘please don’t go’
Or 'up show...'
Yes, I do
Know
Love is beyond all that
Beyond frontiers
Barriers,
Self-cruelty
Weeping fears...
It is more about...
It's especially-
...That peace
That grows in me
As I feel thee...
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23 comments:
dang...that was beautiful...fell you here with me...yeah....nice pic too...yours?
That inner peace...nothing like it. Great piece*
"Don't need revision or extension"
that's been a tough one for me, but as you so eloquently put it,
"it's for me here to keep and conceive"
Dulce this is a marvelous piece, and the artwork you chose is incredible.
Ando en horas bajas, a la caza de esa paz interior...espero encontrarla.
Un abrazo!
Very nice. Beautiful words and feelings so well written.
I enjoy reading your work
Wysteria
very well written me likes :) Check out First Kiss http://t.co/aV9bbvP and Soul Mates http://t.co/e1DmEJF
nicely written! enjoyed it very much
thank you
such a good place to arrive...that peace that grows...i like how you describe your way to this harbor - yes - feels like reaching harbor after years out on stormy seas..
that peace that grows in me as I feel thee, that was...just great. Thank you
And that is exactly what love is all about. It has that ability to make us feel... secure. And we always know when the love is right... at least... until it is right no more. But then, even then, it was what it was when it was, no?
I loved your last stanza, my dear!
Warm hugs,
Nevine
exactly as nevine says - it was what it was when it was! as simple and uncluttered and unfettered as that! beautiful, dulce!
Such a beautiful message of peace...i love this Dulce! :-)
A perfect love, one without revision, liberating and comforting. Beautiful.
Nothing more beautiful than peace grows in one. And it grows in you...as you feel......Sweet!
Love the idea of this, but not sure I’m ready to say I know, not yet.
Peace is the most beautiful thing of all. Wonderful work, Dulce!
Very nice Dulce!!!
And there you have it - exactly as it is and so beautifully crafted.
Thank you!
There's nothing like that feeling of having something real, and you captured it nicely here. (I like what Nevine said about it.) And if I had done that painting, I sure would have put my name to it!
Peace from the anguish...
a great place to arrive at my dear
so beautifully sculpted
:)
Totally beautiful, Dulce. It would be wonderful to know such inner peace but, alas, it eludes me, always.
This could easily become a dream of mine as I often fall asleep thinking of far away places.
beautiful :D
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