I cannot take this lightly..
That menacing storm
On the horizon
Quoting my wisdom
Mist caressing the mountains
Blessing my existence
And presumption
Trust and devotion
Return with that love
Bitter becomes sweeter
More and more
Rather than less and less
Consoling the soul.
I thrive on your words
Of delight
And in your kiss
Your rest
Your whisper
The former mess
Now
so neat.
_______________________________________________________Posted for OSW
Image: I’ll Catch You if You Fall, by Ina Mar
36 comments:
this has a soul soothing quality...like a lover's lullaby, re-assuring everything will turn out well..
there is beauty in the mess...bitter does become sweeter....lovely dulce
"That menacing storm
On the horizon
Quoting my wisdom" brilliant wordsmithing here! Thanks for your loving comment on my post today:-)
What an excellent turning point in the poem when the harbinger of storm turns into mist caressing the mountainous horizon. Strikes me as an unconditional love poem as much as an expression of positivity.
What a wonderful transformation! A kind word along with some love can make the scariest storm turn into a gentle breeze..
Very beautifully stated here, Dulce... bravo!
There's a depth in that storm on the horizon, but it leaves me with a feeling of things being brushed under the carpet that need explaining. Great story telling Dulce
Lovely, Dulce. Light but deep and fine-drawn with feeling. (And you got to be number one on the one stop list. yay!)
Very beautiful. I agree it does have a lovers lullabye quality. Thanks so much for writing and linking! Gay
love the concluding sentence. lovely.
read my one shot poem here.
Devotion is a messy and beautiful thing....your poetry always captures the essence of what love is all about Dulce. :-)
really lovely thank you
I really enjoyed this, Dulce!
Really cool picture, and I like the whole dichotomy of the beautiful mess. I have often felt this way, and I appreciated your expressions from beginning to end :)
enjoyed
I enjoyed this...lovely!
There's always sweetness in your words, Dulce.
Beautifully expressed from beginning to end.
Never take loving devotion lightly ...
thank you Dulce for reminding the reader how precious it is
love from the moon
I took it as part of your own words coming back, wisdom planted years ago, that comes back in to play in a new or rvived love. Anyway, beautiful. Top notch.
So lovely, Dulce!
"Bitter becomes sweeter
More and more
Rather than less and less
Consoling the soul."
My favorite part. "Devotion" sets the stage for an enjoyable poem about conflicted emotions. Thanks for sharing! :D
" That menacing storm
On the horizon
Quoting my wisdom "
Nicely shared expression . . wow.
The soul consoled becomes the focus of the poem.The effect is so soothing. Beautiful.
Order from chaos. Nice One Shot, Dulce!
I had forgotten how well you write endings, Dulce. This one surprised and delighted me.
Lovely how it gently cascaded into a peaceful end. Wonderful write ~ Rose
It calmly falls and engulfs us....
Here is my One Shot: beguiling time
As do these mountains, I hear that storm which loudly speaks, and see and feel the mist which caresses. Both are good.
As for presumption, it is ocean's depth, and I no longer can swim to that bottom. No matters yesterday, or tomorrow. Today is now, this moment...Eternity
However, each owns God-given space for belief, for faith, enduring, and saving.
LOVE and PEACE!
Excellent
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yes, we thrive on his kiss - and the mess become less and less - beautiful words beautiful thoughts, dear lady!
Çok Güzel Site. :)
Bitter becomes sweeter....I've found this to be true in life...in love....in everything but it takes time for that bitter to slip into sweet. Hope your week is the best one yet. Everything sweet...☺☺
Ah!... magical...
Kisses
AL
that is great, isn't it? when a new feeling changes our old horizon and we can't but welcome it and enjoy how it changes our...mess
What a lovely poem and image. Very thought-provoking. Thank you. Sal
Dulce, this is a treasure. And your existence should be blessed. It adds much to mine.
Devotion makes love sweeter...
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