Solstice Drafts
What if we have a nap
In my secret
So secret yard
Which is not behind
Or next to any land
Created just for me
by the guardian spirit
What if we run
along the notes
played by this sea
which is not hidden
but only we can get to see.
It’ll be nice nice nice
Life life life
and listen and smell
together
this infatuation
which is not forbidden
why, nobody understands
What if we play with our words
those
which we only infer
and seize
What if we touch,
caress and kiss
What if we do
and reach
high high high
until the nap is
inevitable?
____________________________________ PIC > Ramon Kelley "Bronze Girl"1994
12 comments:
i can hear in my mind your words.... it is a soft melody ...
thanks for this lovely post ~
... a nice way to begin my Saturday!
i much like the idea of having a secret yard
Which is not behind
Or next to any land...have a lovely weekend dulce
sounds light a delightful afternoon to me...lovely dulce
I like all the what if’s here.
what a way to end this piece..
liked the last part..
nice write..
'what if we run
along the notes
played by this sea'
I love those words, brilliantly placed for maximum effect. A beautiful poem, Dulce xx
The things that I like most in this poem is the rhythm. As someone has already said, this piece is very melodic.
Oh and I love the blog's new look too.
Such inspirational words and so painterly and creative too. Ideal way to pass a lazy Sunday - with poetry as my companion and friend. Am off for a nap in my secret garden;-)
well, dear Dulce. I have wanted to take that nap and spend that time with the person I loved. It never happened, not in the way wanted, not for what I hoped. But it is a good thought to have
soft as a trickling stream.... perfect!
Delighful indulgences!!
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