Such inspirational words and so painterly and creative too. Ideal way to pass a lazy Sunday - with poetry as my companion and friend. Am off for a nap in my secret garden;-)
well, dear Dulce. I have wanted to take that nap and spend that time with the person I loved. It never happened, not in the way wanted, not for what I hoped. But it is a good thought to have
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i can hear in my mind your words.... it is a soft melody ...
thanks for this lovely post ~
... a nice way to begin my Saturday!
i much like the idea of having a secret yard
Which is not behind
Or next to any land...have a lovely weekend dulce
sounds light a delightful afternoon to me...lovely dulce
I like all the what if’s here.
what a way to end this piece..
liked the last part..
nice write..
'what if we run
along the notes
played by this sea'
I love those words, brilliantly placed for maximum effect. A beautiful poem, Dulce xx
The things that I like most in this poem is the rhythm. As someone has already said, this piece is very melodic.
Oh and I love the blog's new look too.
Such inspirational words and so painterly and creative too. Ideal way to pass a lazy Sunday - with poetry as my companion and friend. Am off for a nap in my secret garden;-)
well, dear Dulce. I have wanted to take that nap and spend that time with the person I loved. It never happened, not in the way wanted, not for what I hoped. But it is a good thought to have
soft as a trickling stream.... perfect!
Delighful indulgences!!
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