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Friday, January 13

Duelling Inside




Sort of long
Long time ago
A fact so cruel
As a matter of fact
So fool

A sort of
Let’s duel…

Life gave birth
To this sort of ruin

Herein
Where two became one
And could never
Be joined again

Not fun.

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On The Inside (work in progress) by

5 comments:

ayala said...

Hard situation....nicely penned !

Brian Miller said...

hmmm...intriguing...not sure i completely follow...perhaps how you carry around our junk and become seperated from who we once were...i like the dance in your words dulce...

Lidia said...

OMG Sweetie... this seems drastic, really sad and terrible... One from two, the duelling the duality... and not fun, but of course!

steveroni said...

Dulce, I just found these words.............
"Herein
Where two became one
And could never
Be joined again

Not fun."

It sounds like a divorce, but I have seen parents divorce, and from then on become friends as they were not before. It seems the child(ren) hold them somehow together...

I am truly sorry to notice you are/were sad--if that is what means "Not fun."

The 'cruel-dual-duel' concept is smooth writing.

Your chosen image is OUTSTANDING!

This Post could be labeled 'Classic Life'--rather than 'absurd'--grin!

Until next time, live and love well, and be happy, OK?
PEACE!

Margie said...

Not quite sure what this all means but it made me sad, sad for you!

Sending you hugs across the many miles!

Margie.