It’s grey
Everyone can notice that
But you insist it’s white
I clearly spot it’s black
As simple as that
But you refuse to change your mind
I climb and crawl
And shout
You tease and bother
And vow
And we compare and confabulate
Then we argue
Then we fight
No more balls
Or somehows
You keep firm
I keep fixed
There comes the battle
And then the war
And years go by
And then there comes the day
When a wise one turns up
To say
Neither was it
Grey.
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Black and White by JodieT
Posted for d'verse poets- week 28- Opening at 8 pm GMT [ 3 pm EST ]
15 comments:
some times we need that additional perspective to allow us to really see...its a shame so much time has to go by...smiles. nice verse dulce...
Perspectives can surely change with time, sometimes it takes longer than it should though, nicely done!
We need more wise men/women to act as mediators in humans conflicts. Maybe we should elect wise men and women instead of "politicians". Nice one Dulce
Yep--everything's subjective, and its about oh so much more than a color--control, identity, dominance...nice capture, Dulce.
Yep! Everyone sees reality in different ways and who can say his or hers is the real one...?
You express your ideas with beautiful simplicity, that's why I like your way of writing.
:)
I like this - I would remove the first two lines though. If you admit it's grey first up then the tension is gone. Otherwise good good!
If only we'd all bend a little in the first place. :)
Love the ending.
~Shawna
rosemarymint.wordpress.com
Reminds me of the quote "Would you rather be happy or right?" I tend to prefer being right...
I love this!!!!!
wise indeed...what a great image to sit with your words my friend!
Very good.. And so true
Quite wonderful indeed! Thanks!
Holy shit consider me a definite fan of yours. This is so so good. I'm living this.
Amy
Dulce, it really 'bothers' me when a native Spanish speaking Peep writes in English--and makes me 'look up' the words, i.e., 'confabulate'--grin!
But I must reiterate: Your writings have grown in beauty, poetic honesty, and simple simplicity.
Do you write first in Spanish, then translate? Whatever is your manner, each is a gem. Nobody can deny that.
Thank you for contributions, which are now ready for publication in books with hard covers, and pretty pictures on front, titled SWEETER!
Enough out of me today. Love and PEACE always...One of the Peeps!
THANK YOU so much my very dear friends-
ah- it's true some things we'd better keep simple even though they mean so many things
Let me tell you I am SO sorry for not visiting today or yesterday- I'll catch up ASAP.
Busy busy writer, can but write on her own blog.(that's selfis- I know...
LOVE AND PEACE!
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