O
Oh...
Pay me one of those
Visits of yours
Thanks so much for the rose
...And our silhouettes
Reflected on the polished
Marble floor
So quickly now
Covered with our clothes
So quickly now
Taken off
As we make this our love
So close
Oh
Forgot again to shut
That door...
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26 comments:
eh well that is not too important unless the vacuum cleaner sales man stops by...there are more importnat things...smiles.
and now I feel like a total peeping Tammy!
Or the guy at the door could be a
'blind salesman'....
--selling window blinds
Just don't forget those important things--grin!
PEACE!
Impulsive short poem, you made me thinking what happend...
seems to me, though, i should have not let the door open in the first place...:-)
"I saw you with your new boyfriend,
You forgot to close the garage door.
You think he loves you for your money,
But I know what he loves you for..."
(Bob Dylan)
;-)
I love the different directions one's mind can go with this poem
Steamy each thought
Moon smiles
past present or future? steven
Very enjoyable. I must be getting old. My first thought was the cold marble floor after the taking off.
Dulce...
An endless flow of Romance...
HOT!!!
oops!
Nicely done. Your blog has nice imagery.
a wonderful romantic write that would make anyone love marble floors...thank you..bkm
let's hope the neighbours weren't home, heee hee heeee
Great sense of the immediacy of passion, Dulce, the imperative to get close, closer and all else fades away into a mist. Liked it a lot.
I'd close the door behind me when I came in.
Sensual with longing - very nice, Dulce.
Just ... fantastic! The erotic and the humour ... and the style.
Ah, youth...these 66-year-old bones might want to be impulsive but I'd be looking for a bed!
Ah, youth...these 66-year-old bones might want to be impulsive but I'd be looking for a bed!
Im not sure what's better, Dulce, your poem or the comments that have ensued. Enjoyed all!
Steve E, with his blind salesman, lol.
xoxo
Mm. Delicious.
Yea, I agree...Need to slam those doors closed lol...But hey, sometimes it just feels too dang good :)
beautiful....
oh, gee, dulce, you've done that, too??? ;)
Elegant poem Dulce...
I really like the play of words ~ sweet.
I really like this! sensual, risky. Love it
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