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Thursday, April 28

So…


 
Let me caress you so
 Slowly

Let me check
That you are real, so
Slowly

From you to you

So I love you
I love you so

Variable  and consecutive
 
You, hush-hush
 water
 You from you

Slow  touch in
    sweet tune

So I love you,
     in small limits

Here and there
 Lily fragments, and rose,

So I love you,
    the whole of  you:
Essence  of my dream,
    and truth.

Thinking Of You....Canvas Print by MinoYasue

Inspired by and from Spanish poet Gerardo Diego's Sucesiva 

13 comments:

GYPSYWOMAN said...

love these words, lady! let me check that you are real.....from you to you! be still my heart - almost the same identical words i said once - a long time ago in a land far far away in my heart - and so, he did - let me - check him -
totally fabulous piece, dulce!
;)

steveroni said...

Many poems I have read of
One for another's sweet love.
From you to you
To you from you
Sounds like Anthony de Mello
Philosopher he, too!
And besides, great fellow.

Of all that are best
This one is sweetest!

...and PEACE!

Brian Miller said...

yeah, nice and slow...i kinda like that...smiles. beautifully said dulce...very sensual

Scarlet said...

So sweet

The Poet said...

Such sweet words...invitingly sensual.

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Dulce,

A most romantic and loving piece of writing.
Really sweet!

Eileen

Nevine Sultan said...

How sweet the touch of these words... like the lapping of ocean waves against tender skin. Hush hush... yes, please. I just want to hear these words whispered inside my soul... ;-)

Nevine

Helena White said...

Lovely write Dulce...Thank you for taking the time to visit, your comments are appreciated. ~.^

Tammie Lee said...

lovely pace
sweet dear words
to be loved slowly
such a gift

Betty Manousos said...

what a sweet poem!

that is a real feel-good poem!
glad we got to read this.

have a terrific weekend, dulce!

betty xo

Claudia said...

i love you in small limits...beautiful and sensual in its quietness...

RNSANE said...

Erotic, exotic.

A Plain Observer said...

sweet...