Bee,Cute, neat
Have a look at me
And transmit
The power within
Both
You and I
Fly in
Fly away...
Grass,
Soft, sweet
Stand on my feet
So that I feel
Heaven is underneath
Step in
Step out…
Breeze,
Calm, breezy, brassy
Fondling my skin
So that I get lost
Eyes closed
And believe
In
Inner
This ally
I’m gonna keep.
27 comments:
"TO THINE OWN SELF BE TRUE"
What a statement, whoever said that. And you, Dulce, are living it. Me too, BTW! Because in the great scheme of the Universe, that is all I have, myself facing my God. If that is a scary thought, I had better change something.
Great to see you back in action here, Peep!
JOY and PEACE!
i often want to fly away with the bees or birds..
Wonderful connections made with the theme of this. Love the image too.
sigh this is a wonderful write...i love nature...i could get lost in that moment...
I'm going to go out and take a walk in my bare feet on the grass, watching the bees buzz. Delightful!
The second stanza really carries me away. Love this!
Beautiful, there's nothing like being in nature to bring us back to earth from the rat race of daily life.
Beautiful poem. I love the alliteration and rhyming throughout. I really enjoy these lines:
"Eyes closed
And believe
In
Inner"
you captured that tranquility in the garden very well ~
Whimsical and indeed lovely. Touching to read ~ Rose
Short but very sweet Dulce, nice little sunday afternoon feeling to this one
believe in inner... yes!
"Breeze,
Calm, breezy, brassy
Fondling my skin
So that I get lost..."
ahhhh... I feel it thru your words!
ooohh.. I liked the simplicity in your wordplay here, Dulce... there is a lot of innocence and sweetness to it.. and I see a lot of reflectiveness and depth too.. :)
..calming and soothing… reading this is like meditating with your words and imagery.. gracious!
Brightest Blessings!
Meditating.. *sigh* Lovely words..
lovely, evocative poem, but there are mosquitoes out there!
Lady Nyo
Thanks all for the comments...they bring back the peace i tried to transmit
but must admit now i like the picture better than the words.
Sorry if i cannot visit all you, poets... A Greenwich Meridian problem, that's all.
:-)
Living in the moment, lovely.
sweet....
Cheerful, sunny, hopeful!
This one made me very happy!
Loved it Dulce!
Margie :)
Very sweet!! I have so missed your words. Excellent!
x
Thanks and smiles.
Deliciously refereshing words.
The movement of air into and around us is the sustaining and purifying source in our lives. So too can be art. You've combined both here beautifully.
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