If “I was not allowed to play” when desiring to be 'in the game', there was something the matter with me (and there WAS!). However, I always found a way to blame it on 'them' – in my delusion, my insanity. Delusion (one “L”!) can be also 'illusion' (two “Ls”!). Each, an erroneous perception of reality.
Once I was (pleased to be) told I had a mind like a steel trap. Happily did I assume the meaning to be I was 'so smart'--grin!
Like your “PERFECT” picture, they meant I had the lampshade on my head and could not see the light.
Dulce, this piece--certainly not biographical-- is an in-depth observation into a sick mind. You are so blessed in your ability to 'see' things as they are. And you communicate what you see with acuity.
Your write is good and tight. Wish I could keep my comments tight as well, but once begun..... Love, and Peace!
Always a pleasure to read your poetry sweet Dulce! Thank you for commenting on my latest post. I apologize for the delayed response but internet problems prevented me from visiting. Have a beautiful day lovely lady! Hug!
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If “I was not allowed to play” when desiring to be 'in the game', there was something the matter with me (and there WAS!). However, I always found a way to blame it on 'them' – in my delusion, my insanity. Delusion (one “L”!) can be also 'illusion' (two “Ls”!). Each, an erroneous perception of reality.
Once I was (pleased to be) told I had a mind like a steel trap. Happily did I assume the meaning to be I was 'so smart'--grin!
Like your “PERFECT” picture, they meant I had the lampshade on my head and could not see the light.
Dulce, this piece--certainly not biographical-- is an in-depth observation into a sick mind. You are so blessed in your ability to 'see' things as they are. And you communicate what you see with acuity.
Your write is good and tight. Wish I could keep my comments tight as well, but once begun.....
Love, and Peace!
Always a pleasure to read your poetry sweet Dulce! Thank you for commenting on my latest post. I apologize for the delayed response but internet problems prevented me from visiting. Have a beautiful day lovely lady! Hug!
sad she is not allowed to play..that is not fun and feels not so good...some really nice textures...the bridge line there in the middle particularly
The words fit very well with the image.
This broke my heart as the words came so close....to me ...
As I lay here thinking why...
Much love...........
WHy is being acceptive as you are, such a brutal game.. Love the correlation between the picture and poem...
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