Yes, Sweetheart
Oh Sweeter Sweetest
So difficult to believe
Yes, you Love of mine
Can get all that
And deceive it
Crickets chirps have ceased
Because of this so full moon
I guess… they are also
Observing
And their mood
Has its ways on them
As in me and you
Especially in me
While I experience this body
Of a thousand
Different expectations
I receive the nonsense
Of it all
Perceptions of a drop
And some human fantasy
How come you love me?
So used to rejection
Of a kind
Of mine
Of no way to escape
From a solitude
Celebrated at my back
Your existence and insistence
Have made me grow
In a tiny huge, most
Unbelievable mode.
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© Dulce
24 comments:
Take the love and run with it my friend :)
Beautiful! An instant addition to my favorite Dulce poems!
Nice use of contradictory phrases throughout, Dulce. It gives the writing a multi-dimensional depth, and feeling, and texture. Very nicely selected and placed words, all. Lovely, Dulce!
Nevine
Lovely as always, Sweet dear Dulce.
I was just at Steve's place (wow) and I thank you there but will also say here...
I love you my friend!
hugs & love~
Calli
I agree with Thom. Take the love and enjoy :) I did. been married 11 years. I stopped asking how come he loved me about a year ago. Takes a while :)
Did you write that just for me? It is exactly how I feel, thank you.
much love
Questions, questions. Always QUESTIONS! Ask no questions, demand no answers.
Just live and love, relax, enjoy, and be at peace with yourself, your son/family, your lover, and your God.
Dulce, you cannot say there are no benefits to your loves. They are producing MANY great poetics, from your keen brain; from the fullness of your huge heart.
So maybe you might STAY in love with love--and continue to write about the greatest of God's Gifts to us--L O V E!!!
Amor y Besos!
oh you have the magic touch in these words, wonderful dulce!!!
It's interesting that you mention a body of a thousand expectations, that is lust, nice!
how do I love thee!! Let me count the ways. This poem shows how your mood of writes release upon us, brilliantly,. I think when one asks why do you love me? it's because as you said one has been rejected , hurt, used, celebrated behinds ones back to many times..
I feel like I have been sprinkled with fairy dust each time I come here.. SMILES
LUV U sweetest ONE :}
crossing fingers that this post will not get lost as the one from yesterday..
savor the moment, with every sense of your body -- endulge in the moment...
warm smiles,
I think the picture went along nicely with the poem. Another great work.
held to the bosom till daybreak, she knows...
¡Chaaaacha! ¡¡Pero qué poemas escribes!! Hallucinating, que diría Iñaki...
Enjoy your holidays!
que vuelo..
y que alas..
saludos...
I love the picture in the header.
Name That Christmas Song
I'm still working on the Spanish poem you wrote for me. I really like it. When I finally get it I will tell you what I think it said. Or at least what it meant to me.
beautiful. I especially love the
"Your existence and insistence
Have made me grow
In a tiny huge, most
Unbelievable mode." Sarah
That's a beautiful poem. I love the everlasting presence of the Moon in it - moonlight and deceit. Thank you for your kind comment in my poem - it's sweetness of you. I'm not a Poet, I just play. There are so many things beyond my capacity. You're a star!
Just try and be this eloquent and brilliant tomorrow Dulce.
You've been absent young lady!!!
Experts? What do they know! ;)
To find a little joy in living everyday.. only our hearts know the time.
love,
~Silver
beautifully written.
It's nice to know that we are loved in such a way that solitude is no longer celebrated at our back. Lovely as usual sweet Dulce!
Hey love,
In response to your question on my blog, go to the Blogs that Rock link on my sidebar.
Mary is amazing. It was so fun to create with her! Let me know if you need anything else!
much love
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