.Darling girl
Beware
Of the man
With the sack…
You shine
Like a star
Those beautiful eyes
Hair of gold
In love with love
You romantic
Vain
Pretty girl
Charming gem
Don’t show off
So much
Stop Twittering
Like that
Girl
Take care
Beware of them…
For all men
Somewhere
Somehow
Bring that sack...
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To my dearest, sweet niece, M.- aged 13
(NOTE: In Spain we call the bogeyman, ' the man of the sack'...)
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29 comments:
holds so much truth to it. Nice 55!
I'm with Maha...ugh. Great 55!!!
Stop Twittering
best advice around....
Yes..much truth to that. Ugh...I hate that sack!!!
Very good advice here! I warn my daughters all the time about predators online
eery...stay away from the sack! insightful 55...
Hey there, I'm back!
How right you're!!! I'm very afraid about these new technologies, and especially the vultures flying around looking for some innocent victims. Someone should put limits on this...
Nice 55 as always.
Against adversity, fighting spirit!
à bientôt!!
yes, be a smart girl...
and bring your own sack!
hey...all guys? ok, wel maybe, just a bit...
great 55 more young girls need to heed this warning
Oh, how true how true. Words to heed written very well.
Melanie
Excellent 55 my friend and so true. Have a wonderful weekend :)
they often have some kind of mischief in that sack.
thanks for you sweet comment to me! we've both been around for a long blog time.
Santa excluded...I hope!
Now I'm wondering what they call Santa Claus.
Hey!
LOL
OK, ok
Some guys are reaaaaaaaly nice...Some even Too nice ;)
And as for Santa...I guess in that sack he brings presents... he does not take them away!
Thanks for commenting...
:)
Hugs
Dulce
great 55...holds truth so good advice...but then there are those amazing guys who shine. Have a great weekend
Delightfully creepy. Sooner or later, all women learn to beware the sack.
Aww to your niece! And thou I do not know her I would say the same to her... man are not always so good with our little girls!
Beware!! I think Im gonna show this poem to my sister...
:)
It's a good piece of advice and well written. children as they grow into adulthood want to be admired - too much
very wise 55
happy weekend Dulce
moon smiles
I'm so glad my kids grew up in a tweet-less era. This one gave me shivers! I've met a few sack men in my day.
Dulce
Lovely verse, you always manage to have a soft over voice, and your 55er does ring true, you said it oh so sweetly never to offend..but got your point across never - the - less.
Cheers,
Joanny
I like the way this poem started with specifics and ended with an all-encompassing remark.
Hope you are having a lovely weekend, dearest Dulce :)
Joy always,
Susan
Sweetly creepy and yes we got to be ware. Nice 55 and enjoy your weekend sweetie. x :)
life lessons learned and shared, really nice piece :)
Dulce, in some parts of the world--where I live?--bogeyman is that beguiling guy who could well be a serial rapist and murderer.
I believe the more we safeguard our young people, a good thing to do, it can be overdone.
Example: I smile a lot--and if a child walks nearby, looks at me, and smiles also, probability is that a parent will grab the youngster and whisk them away from "the bogeyman". ME? Bull Crap! (I had typed 'Creap'! LOL!)
And I wonder at what is happening in our world? But...the earth will survive, even if the Peeps do not.
Please don't make your children think every 'man' is BOGEY. But DO know where ARE the children and what ARE they doing! (Like "Twittering"??? OMG! BAD, I mean it.)
Sorry about the length of this--reject if you like, I will not be bothered.........NOT!!!!! LOL!
P.S. I enjoy your Header(s). Will not tell you--and everyone else which one--but you have one guess.
from--the BOGEYMAN! LOL!
Veroni dear,
please
Don't you ever call 'that' yourself again ok?
...and especially don't you ever write things like
'Sorry about the length of this...'
Yours are those comments that- when do not get to us- are soooo badly missed!
A Long time ♥ing you Fiddleman!
;))
Thank YOU all my friends for your ideas thoughts, opinions on this difficult issue, which somehow bothers us all... and of course I know NOT all guys are bogeymen! Thank God!
Most of You are so imperfectly amazing! (LOL)
That's what I love about HUMANS (women or men)- as far as we respect and accept each other and take care of our innocent children...
hugs
:)
Dulce
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