Two souls
So distant so near
Linked together
Unique union
…
Our bodies
Our thoughts
Do not matter any more
And we don’t have to die
Or go to sleep and dream
To feel
Our love
…
Beyond
Evolution
Revolution
Translation
Coincidence
Or illusion
Invention
Or secondary intentions
Or fears, or tears
…
Our souls so near
Do not need special wills
Inner efforts
Taken for granted
Sympathy or old experiences
To be this one joint
...
It's well known
Ever since
You arrived in my existence
Two souls
So close
Wake up
With the same light
Worthwhile
...
Two souls
One same goal.
....
Deviantart Image: Despite Nevertheless by Panibe
21 comments:
like that one stanza where you just let rip...great flow...two souls that close are a very special thing indeed...
These words sound as if inspired, Dulce. They are in the title of your blog--they ARE the title, "SWEETER POETRY".
A Peep must look very VERY far away to find any sweeter than...
your imagery and words made me sigh.... beautiful poem
This is intoxicatingly tender. Thanks.
All the best, Boonie
one could only wish to be so blessed... :) darling. comprehendable. hopeful.
A sweet write of love found when two come together and KNOW that this was meant to be... all along. True love transcends all. And your honeyed words transcend... the mind... and the heart... as always.
Lovely, my Sweet Dulce!
Warm hugs,
Nevine
This poem is wonderful ... and beautifully crafted.
Thank you for this post.
Me gustan las almas enamoradas... Te está quedando el blog precioso...
Muchos besos.
A rare and beautiful thing.
This is what real love is about. Beautifully done, Dulce.
Victoria
my 160
http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/10/03/sunday-160-sweet-ps/
Dulce
Yes so true you write from the heart as the comments suggest,
one has to experience this type of love to know it exists -- and even at that it is often difficult to express in words, and even harder to capture the fleeting beauty and essence of the moment -- here you eloquently manage both -- and we may re-live through your graceful artistic expression that sublime moment again.
Cheers,
Joanny
Dulce
Lovely
I really like the point where bodies and thoughts no longer matter. A special realm beyond.
~rick
Wow! Your words made me tear up. Simply beautiful.
xo
Awww though I have no experience at all in this stuff I, as a woman, know what it may be like.
And if it is this way, then it may be beautiful.
This transcends space and time dear Dulce as does love
moon smiles
This is beautiful Dulce! This connection is hard to find...But when found, its the most profound experience of your life...If you can hold onto it...
You smoked what? Oh, THAT kind of joint - sorry!
Evolution Revolution? Wasn't that the band on "Lance Link: Secret Chimp"?
(I'm so confused!)
I said the same about most everything you write, but this is really wonderful. This is what we look for and are sometimes lucky enough to find.
golly there's some expression for ya! what closeness, symmetry almost, between souls
Oh yeah, that's what i am looking for. I can melt right into this poem.
Waking up in light with another soul...that says so much!
Sigh.....
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amazing piece.
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