Could not help it
But get fed up with it
Maybe you expect me to
Write
A dedication to you?
Well that’s the way it might be going
As this misunderstanding is growing
And my furiousity
For your stupidity
Vanity
Cruelty.
I think you wiser
I love you nicer
I am sweet
I am deep
I am …
...That leaf
Moved by the wind
Of now that
You caught me
You have me...
I am sweet
I am mean
I want more
... it all
And one day I go there
And find myself
Judging you
Judging me
And that blind orator
Comes and
Reminds me
We are just all the same
Same winners
Same sinners.
..........
10 comments:
This is bitter sweet...
The last line is anti-climax: "We are just all the same." How true these words ring! We are just all the same.
Joy always dear sweetest.
Susan
Hi Dear,
Very deep thoughts, I love the way you express your feelings. Everyone should make an examination of conscience and know the reason for their existence.
Anyway, congratulations again!
Take care friend!!
in many ways...yes we are...
Sweat and Mean, such a lovely combination.
Love it! A little desperate, bitter piece but lovely!
And yes we are just all the same.
So very true!
Betty xo
Dear Dulce:
Your poetry inspires me -- you have a broad range of emotions from which you draw upon, that others can clearly interrupt from their own experience and viewpoints. Your sweet comment on my blog the other day reminded me of a quote from Leonardo da Vinci - and I believe it applies to your poetry as well
-Painting is poetry that is seen rather than felt,
& Poetry is painting that is felt rather than seen.
~
cheers,
joanny
P.S.
Love the new look on your banner and blog site.
Warm hugs to you,
joanny
How can we avoid the expectations and thus avoid "judging me, judging you".
The Now that you caught me you have me...reminded me of the pursuit, the different image presented while pursuing one and then the true colors appear again.
Aw, perfect truth.
I love it <3
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