.
.
.
You know
I feel I am a sweet angel
Loving to watch
While you…
Whatever,
You
You know,
I feel
I prefer to be off and on again
Than not trying
Just one more time
All the time
Till the end of time
Do you mind
That I know?
Do you mind
If I always
Love you?
...
19 comments:
So sweet.
I love it <3
not at all...smiles.
love the watching them do whatever...that is the way i feel at times...
I love it too! Bless you.
The page and background looks really cool. Creativity streak in you is not easy to be discreet huh?
Enjoy reasding what your beautiful mind has expressed, as usual. ;)
Silver
You words connect very well with thoughts I have had about continued love. This is very good
How can anyone mind when the offer is from the sweetest of the sweet. I am sure you're teasing and provoking the person.
Hope the Sunday is rolling on well, dear Dulce.
Joy and love,
Susan
Dear Dulce, I am sure no one would mind at all.
Asking permission to love.
What a great thought.
Just Beautiful.
I had to squeeze in a comment before I leavefor colder climes.
this actually makes me sad :( beautifully put... maybe a little to close to my own home :)
Is another EVER capable of controlling who loves her/him? So, who could mind?
Dulce, your poems are ever-questioning yourself and others and there is more always in your thinking, than just the words.
Well, that is what 'poetry' can be. And, you do it well, as also in picking sidebar graphics...and the T.S. Eliot quote is "WOW!"
PEACE!
Steve E
All the time
Till the end of time
Do you mind
That I know?
Do you mind
If I always
Love you?
Extraordinary süper, congrulation.
Un abrazo.
this is so perfect for me tonight, amazing!
I don't think there is anyone on this earth who would decline your offer of eternal love, Miss Dulce!!!
What a great poem.
It feels like it is about the love of my life, the one girl who I truly love, and how we wander in and out of each others lives. About how sometimes it's been many years between us meeting again, we have more and more passion each time we meet again.
We ask each other all the time "do you know?" and the only answer to the question is to look into the others eyes and say "I know".
We know!
Is there any other way for a poet to be except passionate about the person who we love? Is there any other way to be than to not ever give up on a person who we truly know that we love?
And look at this--you beat me to the poem! Good job on this one.
This is just so sweet Dulce :)
Love these words Dulce.
So casual, but filled with so much feeling.
"I prefer to be off and on again"
That line is really sticking with me.
So sweet writing! "Do you mind if I always Love you?"
Absolutely beautiful!
B xo
Love Me forever- Please
such a beautiful one.. :)
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