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Monday, October 18

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Honey...

Honestly
Honey..

Sorry

I did not mean
to hurt you

But

Honey...

I am so glad
I did.

-

24 comments:

Isha Ethera said...

hm.. thoughtful..

Jhon Baker said...

I just really like this. Yeah, it's perfect in every way.

Andrew said...

This piece opens up all kinds of avenues for me.

Brian Miller said...

hmmm...interesting...perhaps in the pain a wall was broken...

Dr. Cheryl Carvajal said...

Wow. Profound.

Marcia M said...

cleverly done. Now I'm thinking! lol is this a good pain?

Anonymous said...

You have a VERY VERY open mind & a reflective personality..... Me like!

Love

Agneta

S. Susan Deborah said...

Mean woman. Sometimes I feel that way. I am sorry that I hurt someone but I am glad for the relieving of my mind.

Evocative and quite realistic.

Big hugs dear Dulce.

Joy always,
Susan

aguja said...

And the photograph perfects the piece.

JStar said...

I like how you felt this open...It makes us wonder...

steveroni said...

I'm thinking that 'hurting' and 'being hurt' is all part of life.

But to 'honestly' say "I'm so glad I did." ...Well, I dunno 'bout that!

PEACE!
Steve E

Some interesting comments...

25champ said...

This was cleverly written. Me like :)

Dulçe ♥ said...

hummmmm---
I doubt anyone can get to feel satisfaction by hurting a beloved... This simple poem is a simple second in the life of any of us... when we have been hurt, we feel the other needs to feel that harm they made and so we kinda try to take revenge...

Thanks for your comments, my dear friends.

I'll try to catch up on you ASAP

:)

SILVIA said...

¡RRRRRRRREbueeeenooooooooooo!
Besos mil!!!

Gugo said...

Wow! I love it! Thank you! So direct and powerful! I know waht you mean ;)

Shadow said...

it hurts to be kind??

eric1313 said...

Kind of hurts perhaps...

1ManView said...

Just like opposite attract, sometimes a little honest pain, makes one reflect....

A Plain Observer said...

let me think about this...The offenses that have hurt the most are those that have given the offender pleasure but...I read this poem as knowing the other person has been hurt by something we didn't mean, allows us to know they care and so we are glad.

Rick said...

I love this Dulce!
A few well spoken words with a thousand possibilities.
This plays well to a subtle smirk.
~rick

Ileana said...

Sometimes hurt leads to deeper love and understanding; it's not always "el color de rosas." I love this one, primita...and the image is priceless. :)

moondustwriter said...

I concur. That kitty was quite content until she was flung - claws happen


purring from the moon

Dr. Mohamed said...

Love is a strange one.

Puzzle.Blume said...

sometimes it needs a little scratch to get under the surface.