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Friday, November 6

Fifth Floor (55)


The boy selling

Out loud in the streets

‘I sell blankets and shits,

I sell blankets and shits!’


An aged woman

At the window

On the fifth floor

Of a building

Without lift

Tells him to come up…


‘Boy it’s not shits

but sheets.’


‘And you’ve called me up

Just for this,

Silly

Shit-ty

Miss?’

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Dulce

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22 comments:

anthonynorth said...

I can imagine his frustration :-) Nicely done.

Anonymous said...

Poor kid. Like the photo, by the way...looks like something around my neck of the woods.

My 55 is posted: Flash 55 ~ Awakening

Shadow said...

perfect for this friday, heee heee heeeeee. have a great weekend!

Fireblossom said...

This is the penalty for using bad words. ;-)

Hootin Anni said...

LOL....I LOVE this one!!!!

Mine is Pepper Sprayed today. Click Here and scroll down beyond my Friday's Show n Tell to find my 55. Have a glorious weekend.

Brian Miller said...

this one gave me a chuckle. meddling lady..lol. fun 55. have a great weekend.

mine is up.

Dr.John said...

My mother would have been waiting for him with the Lava soap to wash his mouth out.
Great 55

steveroni said...

So now YOU are the one telling the jokes. Hmmmmm.
GooooD 55

clean and crazy said...

that is too cute, my 3 year old says look mom the clock!! without the 'l' in it.

G-Man said...

As my son would say.."Your The Shit"! (Thats a compliment BTW)
Word play is rampant today I tell ya!
Excellent 55 Dulce..
Thank You My Dear for playing and visiting...Please have a Kick-Ass Week-End...G

Liam said...

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha.....

Liam said...

Have you ever stopped and looked at the verification words that you have to leave before the comment is accepted?

Mine was 'Vascopy"

It sounds like a medical procedure. I have to go tomorrow and have a Vascopy.

The one I am about to enter now is " SeSSness.

Stop that Sessness right now.

Nessa said...

Very funny 55. Silly.

Flash 55 - Holiday Preparations

Anonymous said...

love the photo, and a perfect 55 on this shitty day lol
Have a great weekend.. SMILES and HUGS

Sylvia said...

Laughing to tears!!!

LarryG said...

:p

you are incorrigible! :)

CJ said...

Great Flash 55. I can relate to this. Living in Brazil, I made lots of Portuguese mistakes which usually had the Brazilians rolling in laughter, but occasionally brought a reprimand.

Tom Bailey said...

Funny. I like the window pics the balance of them is really interesting.

DreamDancer said...

Oh gosh, too too funny :0

Just Be Real said...

Enjoyed you 55. The picture makes it even more special. Blessings dear one. ♥

hope said...

Ah, that's what happens when you add your two cents worth without being asked. :)

Have a wonderful week off to yourself!

Mona said...

LOL! Poor little boy! :D