I wish you knew
Right now…
About these feelings of mine
About this painful thinking
For loving you
Oh! I could not bear for you
To see my soul
As it cries out
For your comforting arms
To surround and
With kisses smother it
Oh! How can I get rid
Of this sweet feeling
Right now…
If only it did not do this to me
If only I could take control of it again
You’ve done it
You’ve won
Right now…
This is the first time
In many a moon
I have cried
I don’t know why
Or do I?
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19 comments:
Dulce, I have a strong feeling you are describing again yourself. If so, I woud feel the same pain you experience. I cannot bear to see my friend in such turmoil.
Otherwise, your words are just too surely coming from the depths of your past, reaching up to the muse which is yours today. Anyway I look at it, this canvas you paint with such words is starkly beautiful.
LOVE and PEACE for you, Dulce
WOW this is POWERFUL!!
I feel this has happened to me, how one can love so deeply and not get it in return, when we are missing that someone, our soul cries, when i cried in those moments, I knew it would always be that way, with HIM
IT HURTS
GOSH u get inside my heart and soul
,love the photo to
sweet YOU
HUGS
Uh huh. Like the Succubus in my poems yearning for Chloe, I have feelings for someone but they don't come back anymore. My tough luck.
Great poem, great picture!
Very nice poem. I think at one point in our life we all go through this at some point. Have a great Sunday :)
The pain of unrequited love does hurt so. This poem captures that moment so well.
I once laughed at the thought of dying of a broken heart but when it happens you realise how true that can be.
Very touching poem.
Sunny Sunday #6 - Color Me Sunny
Attraction is the strongest thing in the world. Sometimes it's stronger than love. Not explainable, only able to be described by a poet.
Dulce-why would she wish to rid herself of sweet feeling? Crying is not a bad thing, not even for a languishing soul. Lovely write. ~rick
Oh, don't worry! You are a defeated winner "Is to think that you win in loosing" like my friend Camoes, whom you certainly know. Lovely sweet poetry! (I wish I knew how to write about Love like you do!) :)
I have come to view tears as healing, each tear possessing a healing for my body, mind, soul. This is an amazing poem. The insight of the soul, the insight of the heart...thank you fore revealing your heart to us; it is a gift.
G
Oh sweet Dulce, how I feel these longing words rip a hole right into my heart! To love someone so much, yet trying to smother it... painstaking.
Very, very, deep.
Very touching, very deep my sweet friend.
I know the very feelings you describe...the beauty of that love, the loss, the longing, and the return of those emotions that come again and again.
Wow, I can feel this one to my very core.
So moving!
So touching!
Go ahead and have a good cry dear!
it's so good for the soul!
Margie
XXX
why would you want to hide love like this so beautiful???
Echoing and powerful. And the last line? Brilliant.
take your time sweet one,
wouldn't it be a pleasure to "eat you up" - haha
longings, yet knowing that we belong to life and that is bigger than everything...
hugs dear dulce - deep resonating hugs
I think that is an Alabama expression, as they say "one minute I could just eat her up, the next minute I wish that I had" - haha!
it's the woman in the photo. This woman's story I know. The 9 year year old isolated and alone the stranger mongst friends.
This image is of the healed women. You are reading what she feels. She is telling you of the difference between incomplete and nearly or completely healed.
Where'd you get the image Dulce?
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