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Wednesday, November 4

IF I, WILL YOU?


If the lion comes

In chase of me again

Will you defend me

From his fierce

Claws and teeth?


If I get lost in the middle

Of the huge forest trees

Will you come

and rescue me

From those giant

Open mouth beasts?


If I find myself running

Again along the foggy

Never ending street

Will you come and take

Hold of me?


If I wake up

From this bad dream

Will you be sleeping

Next to me?


Or will it be only

The two beautifully

Framed photos

On my bedside table

All I’ll get to see?


© Dulce____________________________________________________________Deviantart Image

23 comments:

Nessa said...

Beautiful longing for a partner.

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Drahdrah said...

So sad, yet beautifully written

clean and crazy said...

very haunting, i love the flow. you are such a treat to read.

steveroni said...

This could well have been Numero V of the series of "When she..."

Dulce, I am certain "he" will enjoy with infiniteness, waking to see beautiful you on the one side, and two photos of him on the other.

You have so much of love demonstrated in this series, so much love in your heart, in your soul. Thank you for letting all your Peeps be the recipients of that love--for now!

PEACE...and LOVE!

Jessie said...

so sad --
however i have no doubt it would be "his" loss!!!

Anonymous said...

I am not sure if my comment went? I hit post but not sure it went through. DANG.. I will check back later.. I hope it did..

I basically stated that this was like a nightmare, haunting, very deep. I know I have had those dreams, lucid, and wanted to awake and see him beside ME in the BED.

You always write with passion, soul, love, If i was a man LOL I would want to be in your dreams, SMILES

Susan at Stony River said...

Beautiful, sweet and just possibly sad; I loved it the whole way through.

LarryG said...

this so reminded me of this piece - I just have to share - If You Asked Me I Would -
you get lotsa x's and o's today Dulce!

Shadow said...

you have asked so nicely, how can you be denied???

Liam said...

My head is elsewhere today. I always read your words twice.

The first time I read this I thought I read Breasts instead of Beasts

heavealie said...

ohh well written poem!!this was simple yet the question asked showed tenderness and longing for love!!keep writing!!and yea i found your blog through a series of poetic blogs!!

Angeles said...

Everything is inside us.
If you think that is so...
Besos:)

Ellie Kings said...

It's always nice to be rescued. But I've learned that sometimes we have to rescue and fight for ourselves. Love the poem, very heartfelt.

Sylvia said...

I will defend you against the lions... Let me grab my sword. Where is he? Where is he?... How dare you to attack my friend? Go back to your cave! Rrrroooooaaaarrrr! As you see, I loved your poem!

Dr.John said...

Your poem seemed sad and lonely. A poem of longing, of need .
Well written.

Anonymous said...

The uncertainty of the near tomorrow. You've expressed it well.

Rikkij said...

Dulcey-perhaps he is somewhere in danger waiting for her to rescue him. Your words always tease and question. I like that. ~rick

Fireblossom said...

Oh, it gets tiresome always saving ourselves, doesn't it sweet one? One begins to wish for someone else to take over, if only for a while.

I agree with Shadow, how could anyone say no to such a charming plea?

Anonymous said...

This was either very sad or very lonely. I can't really distinguish between what I feel after reading it. It's powerful I tell you. :)

Anonymous said...

I understand the feeling

Just Be Real said...

Sweetly written. Touched me. Thank you. Blessings....

Calli said...

Sweet longing and the wonder if the beloved returns...*sigh*

xx

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