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Thursday, November 12

No Compassion



What is itDown there
My curiosity
What you have
Down there
The second place
I’ll put my hand…
The first
Both in your cheeks
To make sure
You are up here
In my lips
And
Once
I’ve found it there
Where it must be
I’ll have that great bliss
I’ve been longing for
This glowing hit
Which makes me
Once more
Be convinced
As long as
I get you there
Now you will this
Never miss.


28 comments:

steveroni said...

How about a bowl of Tomato Soup and a nice Grilled Cheese sandwich?

(maybe more later...later?)

PEACE and LOVE

Shadow said...

is there longing... a need to know he is there... a comforting touch to realise he is... for the feelings to settle, find relief, release.

Nessa said...

I'm curious too.

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Calli said...

Ah, the longing...and just as Shadow has said, that comforting touch, relief and release. We so need that security to let go, huh?

hugs to you~
Calli

LarryG said...

This is Hot! Dulce
Very very Hot!
mmmmm, warms me.

Sylvia said...

Great. It sounds like those years when I was discovering sexuality. A very inspiring poem!

Anonymous said...

There is such power in a touch or touching, hitting the right places, with the right person,

to let go or go there!!

another inspiring and passionate write
SMILES and HUGS

Unknown said...

Oh the longing...it's the hardest...and the softest. What great prose based on the longing and the mystery of what we all hold.
G

Ellie Kings said...

Lovely, sensual, intriguing... beautiful as always!

Anonymous said...

MMMM....very hot my friend. I wonder what's there as well :)

Liam said...

I find it funny how both dudes find it Hot and the girls find it sensual and longing.

Margie said...

WOW!
That about covers it!

Margie
xx

Wait. What? said...

sultry and sensual. Wonderfully done. A celebration of closeness.

steveroni said...

LIAM...
LIAM...I always thought I was a "dude" also. I better take another look? LOL!

Actually I read this post as tender, loving, desiring, needful and totally human, also sensual in its presentation!

AND REALLY HOT, MAN!!!!!

Ah! Youth! Ah! Love!

Anonymous said...

That felt good and it's in my brain now, thanks.

Walter said...

Es muy sutil para mi inglés, creo entender la idea...pedí ayudita al traductor pero ya sabes no es muy sensual....
Y hope yo never miss.
Besos:)

Nikki (Sarah) said...

beautiful. powerful.

Liam said...

Sorry Steve I must have mistaken you for a Dudette.

Dr.John said...

This is coming close to clarity and a poet utterly clear is a trifle glaring.

Dulçe ♥ said...

ha ha ha - love you both (Steve & Liam)
Oh you *dudes* have made me laugh (LOL) your observations have been the best of the day, just because there is something down there only YOU have that we do not!
Sweet Hug- above waist...
;)

Fireblossom said...

I find it sensual and longing.

*smirk*

Tabitha.Montgomery said...

Damn..

DreamDancer said...

*giggle* at some of the other comments, I think they pretty much cover everything I'm thinking... love this Dulce!

Thank you dearly for your prayers and kind comments on my posts, you're one of a kind, my friend :)

Anonymous said...

The ending hits one with a strong feeling.





By the by: Never apologize; no apologies necessary.

Shadow said...

okay, i'm a bit confused here cause these comments were to a beautiful poem you did yesterday that's no longer here???? or am in the twilight zone, what did i miss???


as for the little doll, you tore my heart open with your words. i wish i could whisk her up and away...

The Girl With The Mousy Hair said...

Oh, to have that great bliss.
I can almost touch it Dulce.
Thank you for paying me a visit, I had not forgotten you at all.

I love my little doll as well, so sad. It would not let me comment for some reason.
xxx

dirt clustit said...

:)
You two are awesome. Thank you for having my here with you today.

Please give me your hand miss DulceT

Have you ever noticed that you taste slightly but noticeably -sweeter...

right before you cum....



sea

dirt clustit said...

I don't know how long I'll be staying, but every minute of time spent amongst either of you or any of your community members has either been enlightening, a blessing, or pleasant.

I still haven't completely pieced together the thread that ties us all together so closely.

Does anybody else here feel it?
Twins to each one of us and we are to each other.

And I didn't necessarily see that between us all outside of this e-room (accept for Sarah)

How many of us are there everywhere and behind us in line or in the car next to us

Remember your thoughts and feeling if you can as we came through each post

Felt to me like many or most affected us each in very similar
ways, si familiar

When you see someone in the world struggling or in need. Practice empathy and compassion

if nothing else, for now it seems more important than helping. This feeling them is key

this key is the point
the point is the key

being able to feel how they felt during their struggle or time in need. remember the key


love dusty
Via con Dios