What is itDown there
My curiosity
What you have
Down there
The second place
I’ll put my hand…
The first
Both in your cheeks
To make sure
You are up here
In my lips
And
Once
I’ve found it there
Where it must be
I’ll have that great bliss
I’ve been longing for
This glowing hit
Which makes me
Once more
Be convinced
As long as
I get you there
Now you will this
Never miss.
28 comments:
How about a bowl of Tomato Soup and a nice Grilled Cheese sandwich?
(maybe more later...later?)
PEACE and LOVE
is there longing... a need to know he is there... a comforting touch to realise he is... for the feelings to settle, find relief, release.
I'm curious too.
Thursday Thirteen - Me & Music
Ah, the longing...and just as Shadow has said, that comforting touch, relief and release. We so need that security to let go, huh?
hugs to you~
Calli
This is Hot! Dulce
Very very Hot!
mmmmm, warms me.
Great. It sounds like those years when I was discovering sexuality. A very inspiring poem!
There is such power in a touch or touching, hitting the right places, with the right person,
to let go or go there!!
another inspiring and passionate write
SMILES and HUGS
Oh the longing...it's the hardest...and the softest. What great prose based on the longing and the mystery of what we all hold.
G
Lovely, sensual, intriguing... beautiful as always!
MMMM....very hot my friend. I wonder what's there as well :)
I find it funny how both dudes find it Hot and the girls find it sensual and longing.
WOW!
That about covers it!
Margie
xx
sultry and sensual. Wonderfully done. A celebration of closeness.
LIAM...
LIAM...I always thought I was a "dude" also. I better take another look? LOL!
Actually I read this post as tender, loving, desiring, needful and totally human, also sensual in its presentation!
AND REALLY HOT, MAN!!!!!
Ah! Youth! Ah! Love!
That felt good and it's in my brain now, thanks.
Es muy sutil para mi inglés, creo entender la idea...pedí ayudita al traductor pero ya sabes no es muy sensual....
Y hope yo never miss.
Besos:)
beautiful. powerful.
Sorry Steve I must have mistaken you for a Dudette.
This is coming close to clarity and a poet utterly clear is a trifle glaring.
ha ha ha - love you both (Steve & Liam)
Oh you *dudes* have made me laugh (LOL) your observations have been the best of the day, just because there is something down there only YOU have that we do not!
Sweet Hug- above waist...
;)
I find it sensual and longing.
*smirk*
Damn..
*giggle* at some of the other comments, I think they pretty much cover everything I'm thinking... love this Dulce!
Thank you dearly for your prayers and kind comments on my posts, you're one of a kind, my friend :)
The ending hits one with a strong feeling.
By the by: Never apologize; no apologies necessary.
okay, i'm a bit confused here cause these comments were to a beautiful poem you did yesterday that's no longer here???? or am in the twilight zone, what did i miss???
as for the little doll, you tore my heart open with your words. i wish i could whisk her up and away...
Oh, to have that great bliss.
I can almost touch it Dulce.
Thank you for paying me a visit, I had not forgotten you at all.
I love my little doll as well, so sad. It would not let me comment for some reason.
xxx
:)
You two are awesome. Thank you for having my here with you today.
Please give me your hand miss DulceT
Have you ever noticed that you taste slightly but noticeably -sweeter...
right before you cum....
sea
I don't know how long I'll be staying, but every minute of time spent amongst either of you or any of your community members has either been enlightening, a blessing, or pleasant.
I still haven't completely pieced together the thread that ties us all together so closely.
Does anybody else here feel it?
Twins to each one of us and we are to each other.
And I didn't necessarily see that between us all outside of this e-room (accept for Sarah)
How many of us are there everywhere and behind us in line or in the car next to us
Remember your thoughts and feeling if you can as we came through each post
Felt to me like many or most affected us each in very similar
ways, si familiar
When you see someone in the world struggling or in need. Practice empathy and compassion
if nothing else, for now it seems more important than helping. This feeling them is key
this key is the point
the point is the key
being able to feel how they felt during their struggle or time in need. remember the key
love dusty
Via con Dios
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