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Saturday, April 24

Mist


In the middle of the mist
Of the mystery
The thick mist
The veiled mystery
You came up
You found me
I approached you
I was eager to dance
Felt your music
From soul to mind
I was eager to dance
Fall in your arms
And belong to you like the wind
So my wings
Did not need to fly
But in your arms
Your hands
Your kiss
Your bliss
Ecstasy
Romance
Dance
Who needs more
What else is there so worthy
We chanted
Performed
Toasted our love
All those wounds vanished
All those pains and fears
Ceased until tomorrow
When the mist
And the mystery
The thick mist
The veiled mystery
Came up again...
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17 comments:

Sam Liu said...

The magic and mystery of love is truly wonderful...a time when all else is naught, when you have someone who's there to catch you when you fall. A marvellous poem, Dulce.

steveroni said...

Enveloped in misty mystery they met.

One day they really met, in reality.

After a time of exquisiteness with each other, they had to part.

Back into the mysteriously veiled mystery they lost themselves again,
one from the other.

Dulce-Peep, this interpretation
is what I found here. Is it close?
Take care, girl!

GYPSYWOMAN said...

just beautiful, as always, dulce! beautiful!

Toni M.M. said...

Simply Lovely.....and Sweet, as one would expect!!
Who said that a foggy day is sad? Sometimes it can be exciting...!!
Liked it, Dulce!
Kisses,
Toni.

Anonymous said...

So beautiful. And the photo is just perfect for this :)

Sheri said...

reading this was such joy, how i wish it were me but then i'd have some explaining to do when hubby got home ;) thanks for sharing your life, your love...

Jingle said...

incredible!

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/well-here-comes-the-week-15-rally-awards-and-more/


two poetry awards,
plus,
hot blog award,
you are a princess award.
enjoy!

Lu Ann said...

Wow! this is great.

I know what you´re talking about.
Do you think there can be such a thing as a really passionate kiss between two friends who have a strong bond and really care about the other?
I mean like a kiss that even when that passionate, could only be a really strong way of showing their care for the other?

S. Susan Deborah said...

The mist has a certain mysteriousness and ecstacy that it often leads to erotica. Whenever I have travelled and it is misty, I find myself fantasising. It's often quite satisfying that at the end of it, i am left quite warm and horny!!!

This poem reminded me of such emotions.

Hmmmm. Delicious.

Have a lovely sunday,
Susan

Nevine Sultan said...

Dulce, this piece is exquisite. It's filled with emotion, and movement, and love, and pain, and love love love more love. Every word was precious. And every line was felt. I hope you're having a lovely Sunday, Sweetest! :-)

Nevine

steveroni said...

Dulce You were the first to reach my four-day -blog and I think I must apologize for deceiving you… it is not fair to deceive one whom I esteem so highly. Please will you understand?
Love Ya girl

Felicitas said...

Long live the mystery in the mist - reality is overblown! LOVE it!

Dulçe ♥ said...

Thank you all for these comments, which mean to me so much!

I love to see Susan and Gypsywoman back again... I've been missing you a lot!!!! ;)
Sam
NEvine
Toni
Jingle
Bananii
Sheri
Feli
Thanks a lot for your visit
I love you ALL!
;)

Steve dear,
No need to explain or apologize. I loved your idea... and I think you should save that blog ... only if you had the time! LOL

Oh... We are hooked on this blogging stuff...we are
Still, I'd love that breakfast
;)

xoxoxo
Dulce

Rick said...

even the mist can't stop the hangover. A lovely trip until then! ~rick

Superfluous Brunette said...

I love this poem. We long to find ourselves through other people and get lost in it. This part especially spoke to me "And belong to you like the wind So my wings Did not need to fly". Escaping into another...until the veil is lifted and we have to face ourselves again.

Thank you for your beautiful words on my post...you totally get what I am saying, although all are open to interpret as they will.
I too think of you as a friend. Nice to know someone who knows your soul.
Hugs to you!

JStar said...

Oh, I see this I missed one...

So romantic and love filled...