She had a dream
And in her dream
She saw the rain
Did not get her wet
In her dream conscious she was
Nothing could ever change that past
She dreamt that after a year
He was back
And they came across
Just by chance
She didn’t know what to say
He had nothing much to say
And he started dreaming her
Thank to the universal powers
The angels and Narcissus
Orpheus and Morpheus…
He did
Against his will
She had a dream
That this time he realized
And swallowed his pride
And came and asked her
To forgive and forget
Against her will
She would pretend
She did not care
… maybe one day.
She kept dreaming
And when they eventually met
Everything previously dreamt
According to plan
True came
Love flowed so blissfully
From both sides
Such passion
Could almost stop their hearts
But she had the feeling
That dreaming was free
Like this sweet breeze
Not getting wet with the rain
Could see no future there
She is difficult to satisfy.
While she dreams she can fly.
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24 comments:
So many different layers of reality and time. This was offering so many voices. Hazy vision here, and so beautifully crafted. Had to read and reread it to get the voices and dreams.
Liberation.
Joy always,
Susan
strong and true.
Lovely!
wonderful fairy tale...with a little bittersweet as well...
I can relate to this...Its almost as if you were reading my mind, again :)
Hi Dulce,
You've made a great story, full of feeling and emotion, as always. A perfect description of what can be a dream.
In other matters, please, let me to dedicate this fragment to you, my dear Teacher:
"Poetry is a profession of blind. A good writer doesn't write what he sees, he only writes what he feels"
Dressing to kill!!
Carla
very heartfelt sentiments!
Beautiful words as usual...I can feel her struggle.
Wonderful poetry and really powerful words. I feel we have all had dreams about flying and feeling free from everyday life!
This type of dream is pure enlightenment and totally blissful.
Thank you Dulce, for sharing this beautiful poem.:-)
Jo.xx
me likes :)
great write..
the power of dreams is real... your poem is like a lovely dream as well.
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It was so intense and I had to read it twice to fully grasp it. It was so beautifully intriguing.
Brilliant!
i agree with Maha..read it once then came back for it..amazing how you capture that feeling..i relate to that one,sweet!
such are the ebbs and flows of our passion and... people.
thank you for letting me dream with you here!
Beautiful ending!
I love the last couple of lines, "She is difficult to satisfy while she dreams she can fly." OH! LOVE IT.
We do fly in our dreams. Love this one.
Awesome poem and blog you have here. I will visit again. Thanks for shining!!
"She had a dream
And in her dream
She saw the rain
Did not get her wet"
very odd and captivating. these lines motivated me to red the whole poem. nicely written. great imagery
In my dream I can be in heaven--or hell. Either way, I cannot sleep.
"Not getting wet with the rain"??? Someone must have "dreamed " a rubber coat and named it a raincoat. Which actually is a "dry coat".
Enough chatter from me, Dulce. What I really wish to tell you is how HAPPY i am with the work you did on/for MY BLOG
How may I thank you? Seriously, you have this talent above the inspiring poetry to which we all know so well. It is how to organize and design web pages. Who wold have known????
Peeps can say or write or think, "I love you", until the end of time. But real love is to do for another what they cannot do for themselves. You are A-1 to me.
Thank you.
Te Quiero (I hope that is a correct word!)
Dream one can freely... Ad dreams are the only thing I guess we can call only ours... great work...
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cheers!
Happy Tuesday!
:)
Such a hopeful poem - it made me smile.
Spirit of hope never dies as long as we keep dreaming.
I really enjoyed the message I got from your poem.
Such a beautiful and a dreamy one.. Loved your Blog Template..
Happy Monday..
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Greetings, friend! How r u?
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