In pursuit of a less deceitful dream
In need to draw up
That capricious scene
Where no oath seems to succeed
Discerning a purple light
Motionless
How should I recite
Low or high
Find a less bizarre stillness
In vain diminish
Those remote peaks
I’ll never reach
Overshadowing these now mild
Mysteries of love
Peace, harmony…
Overhearing the voices
Of the ones
Who passed away.
I enhance this nuance
Nude I feel to be
As if in a gallery,
Posing
Resting
Petrified
A work of art
A gem I am
Gazing at you
You are your persona…
…You peep at me
Shame and pity
Cannot see
What
Out of
You’ve skipped.
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12 comments:
what an intriguing dream...shame and pity...wondering about those and the last stanza is pretty twisty...i found myself trying to rearrange the words to fit my feeble mind...lol. a gem, you got that right. smiles.
Hi, my friends,
I'll catch up on you as soon as I can-
This I just needed to write...
Now I really need a rest and I know you'll understand.
I felt like closing comments, but that would not be fair, would it?
Sweeter hugs!
♥ ♥ ♥
Brian wrote so well what I think, but he has the proper wordings...
If you mean you are leaving the blogs--for a time, or forever, THAT would be the shame.
You deprive several hundred "followers" a daily treatment--or treat--of Sweet Poetry, from Sweet Dulce. SO much "sweetness" here....
Take Care, Amiguita
awesome work yet again. there is a new poet online you might want to check him out. i gave him a shout out on my blog.
gonna miss u....please dnt be sweeter to leave but live the sweetest to make me(us)live!!
what a great poem xxx
I love this Dulce...Twisted just as our minds work...I wish I can control my dreams and visions
A vivid dream... that is not a dream... but feels as one... an out-of-body experience... of small glances... poses... flickers of understanding... and realization.
Hoping you are doing well, Dulce. Don't work too hard... take your time... most importantly... come back! Love you bunches!!! And here's a smile for you... :-) ... not a "pregnant" one. ;-)
Nevine
Regresando de vacaciones, disculpa mi ausencia. Prometo ponerme al día prontito. besos!!
this a very intriguing poem. I love its unique style. great poem.
:) I can't even focus on what your poem means, i am sure it is beautiful, it is just that it is such a coincidence with what i just posted on my blog. After i posted i was drawn to your photo (that shows in my blog.) I thought maybe i can set in purple light, use it for my art somehow.
so i do ask you; can i paint the painting you posted?
A gem I am
Gazing at you
I love those two lines and yes, you are. Written with such passion, Dulce, but don't get lost in the dream. I like it very much. ;)
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