I love to be
For you
Like the leader
Of those strange creatures
Of the night
In a full moon.
In other words:
Your witch.
I love to
Have cast this spell
On you-
Not on purpose
Is it possible
That the more one’s loved by another
The freer one feels?
I dance in words.
Like the leader
Of those strange creatures
Of the night
In a full moon.
In other words:
Your witch.
I love to
Have cast this spell
On you-
Not on purpose
Is it possible
That the more one’s loved by another
The freer one feels?
I dance in words.
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16 comments:
nice 55 - and I think - YES!! it is possible!
the more one’s loved by another
The freer one feels..
Beautiful....
Freedom comes...and goes. Gone for...well a bleak 55
You dance in Love.
Besos:)
Is dancing in love better than FALLING in it--grin!!!??? I have always wished for both! (Dare I write: "dreamed"?)
Dulce, Sometimes your words are so...well, so perfect. The spirit of your muse must be joined with you in a very special way.
Agree w Claudia, yesss. The more, the better one is loved, the more assurance that peeps has to be totally her/himself in any given situation.
To be confident in their minute-by-minute decision-making. And with God's help...to act with a certain prudence.
Guess you can tell I think this is a great post? I'll be BACH!
Thank you, Sweet Peep, for all you do, and all you are. :-)
i do believe there is freedom in loving that much...nice 55...
Beautifully said.
freer or strangled...depends on the person, LOL! and how healthy the love is...love from need or true love?
much love
awesome...more loved....greater freer...yep yep and yep...great 55!!
Dulce...
Forget You?....Ha!
Always such a Pleasure visiting The Palace of Prose!!
Beautiful 55 My Friend..
Thanks for remembering ME!!!
You Rock Mama...
Have a Kick Ass Week-End....G
This is a magical 55, Dulce. Your words are so beautiful, and they have a mystical brilliance to them. And the last line is simply perfect, "I dance in words"...I am in awe.
i agree with sam Liu..loved the last line! too beautiful Dulce..awesome reads! glad i came to read this lovely 55!
besitos querida..;)
Dulce, I loved this one. Short and filled with snaps... like punches to the gut.
How we fantasize about what we wish to be for the other...
Hugs,
Nevine
that's dreamy 55,
I feel like dancing with your words flying in my sight,
magical 55.
Oh, this is magical Dulce. And
you do dance in words.
"Is it possible
That the more one’s loved by another
The freer one feels?"
Yes, this has been my conclusion for a very long time now. This is freedom to me and to him ;)
I have MISSED YOU, dear TWIN!
much love~
~Calli
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