And I hear your laughter
And your sense of humour
And I have a view of myself
While you do
And I observe you
For you are my genius
And I feel my tears
And you love me
For saying
I love you
And the rest of your reasons
And I feel your beautiful hands
And your feet
As I massage
Your discomfort...
And you thank me
For always being here
And you blame me
And then forgive me
And I feel my tears
For not having you near
Like in the old years...
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AND I’ve thought so much about You today ... So Much , so much more than usual...that I’ve written another one.
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You left us
And in doing so
You left us
All behind
You left us
Knowing
About the few too many hearts
All broken
Having to admit
Having to accept
You’d left us
All behind you.
You left
Against your will
And I cannot
Of that memory get rid...
You left against your will
And for that reason
Did not take time
Did not have time
Did not think about time
To say goodbye
And did not want
To hear our good byes
Or did you?
You left
Leaving behind
All these bloody
Material things
I’ve had to pick
You left knowing
I’d have to
You left
And now pretend
Maybe
That we understand
That we should learn
Have no other choice
But learn
Life is one and only
You wanted to live this
More than anyone else
So why
You left us.
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12 comments:
Dulce, I simply don't know what to say. There is honest and powerful emotion suffused in the heart-wrenching lines of these soft and delicate poems. This is so wonderful, yet infinitely forlorn.
Such power in these words. Well done. Have a Happt Mothers Day :)
I can really hear your heart...this comes right from your soul....hope your mother's day was a great one....You deserve it....Sarah
Dulce, this is so very sad. Your brother is smiling, though, because he knows he has a sister who cares for him so. He is smiling and wrapping his protective wings around you...
Nevine
I can feel the pain behind the words. Triste pero como siempre, fenomenal.
this is classic dulce...depth, sorrow, touch that goes beyond the sense of fingers, words that speak from the heart-not only from the mouth. i am enthralled with you, your work. dulce, what a beautiful, gifted and talented woman you are!
Of course you miss him, you think about him, you wish him here with you. But you know, what I believe is that he is not gone. His body died, but he did not.
What we are, what is that "likeness to God" is not our bodies...but our souls. That is what I believe.
And his soul is tending to you now, and as the result, you will feel better by morning.
These writings are truly-from-the-heart-and-soul-beautiful!
You'll see.
Take Care, Sweeter Poet
Those lines are really sad ... At first I was puzzled, but I think I could deduce its meaning, and I was totally stunned and "in shock", you know?.
I am convinced that even you can't see him, you somehow feel that he is with you two: he has not abandoned these two hearts. Sure!
I have lived a similar experience, except I have no children, so I can imagine that your pain has nothing to do with what I went through.
Anyway, hugs and tons of encouragement,
Your Faithful follower pupil.
oh wow!
these are so so powerful
xx
So much emotion in these Dulce!
ouch. that hurts.
And you blame me
And then forgive me
And I feel my tears
For not having you near
Like in the old years...
Hola entiendo muy bien el ingles , lo malo es que no lo escribo ...
todo esto yo lo he vivido
un abrazo muy fuerte
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