If I need you to be complete
If you are there for me to succeed
And we are one whole
And without each other
Scarce we are
If I cannot move two steps ahead
Without your feed back
If all I do is wait
For you
So together we go ahead...
If I cannot close my eyes
And not see you
If without your kiss
I cannot feel my lips
And viceversa
Then
Without you
Am just half
Please
You be one
Until I find you
Then
I’ll have achieved that moment
When I realize
I’ll never be anyone
Until I am
the one.
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16 comments:
Dulce muy dulce el encuentro del Uno en el otro, el mejor estado sin duda.
Besos:)
this is beautiful , Dulcissima my sweetheart . .....
i am feeling a bit uncomplete now , but that is ok .....as the poeme is really good ...
kisses bellissima .
dulce, this is the hearts cry for every woman! this is such a loving, empowering word...wondering how i can get there from here! you have filled me with hope...
A lovely piece, Dulce! And a sentiment I so identify with.
"...Until I am
the one"
That's all: YOU ARE THE REAL NUMBER ONE, my friend.
Kisses,
YFFP
Dulce, your writings leave no doubt that you are very deep even esoteric, very talented, extremely intelligent, and you are probably already "The One" but just do not know that yet....
Love ya, peep!
We are all born incomplete, it is not until we find that kindred soul that we are finally perfected, that one with whom all else seems inconsequential...this is a marvelous poem, Dulce, with a infinite truth at its heart.
Mi'ja don't ever doubt you're the one...because you are. Your writing tells us so. ¡Esta buenísimo, primita!
Beautiful and ephemeral. A song I want to take with me after I'e stopped reading it ...
"Until I am the One" Loved that! Beautiful :)
I just love how you can so beautifully play with words. THat was fantastic especially the last stanza.
another poem well done!
You have to be one with self before you can be the other half of the ONE....:)
Yes, my dear J Star, THAT is the idea!
Well I consider one has to be one until two can be TWO, being each One their own one... (!)
Glad you got it!
Thanks everyone for your lovely comments!
:)
I will be back to read more and more. So glad I found your poetry. Empowering write.
Dulce-
I understand. I feel as tho half of me is missing, but would rather I didn't know? No. I like yearning for what might be given making complete. I really liked this.
~rick
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