You brought light
To my eyes
You brought back the smile
To my lips
You brought wisdom
And together with mine
That made two and two
Be five
You brought sane insanity
Unreasonable reason
You also brought
The burden of your past
And together with mine
Made two and two
Be five.
That makes me
Ask how
Why
How can we manage
To start
From zero?
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18 comments:
this is the best feeling , Dulcissima my sweetheart !!!
a great poem for starting a monday and new week .
i am feeling luck now .
that wee zero emphasizes the "infinity" of possibles!
Lovely Sweet one!
Love inspires...
Well, I think you can manage starting from zero!
:) I mean the smile is back, right?
So thought provoking!
whatever the answer to your two and two, it will be the right one.
math I can understand :)
Beautiful. There are so many possibilities in life :)
A delight to read, Dulce...very skilfully crafted, and a beautiful poem about the infinite imbalance that is hopeless love.
Dulce, you are again alive!
Light to your eyes
smiles to your lips
And two plus two is still five!
Beautifully chosen words!
Happy faces :) :) and Love from Florida-Peep
as always, dulce, this was beautiful! makes me yearn for things i do not have...your work is always so moving, always bringing about something in me that i thought was long-ago asleep! thank you...
such a wonderful journey in words~
Isn't interesting how some people can make 2+2=5? Beautiful Dulce...
"you brought sane insanity...unreasonable reason" Powerful. Take gentle care ok.
zero is the circle that never ends...
lovely poem!
ah, dear dulce, you've been rummaging the closet of my life again! beautiful, lady!!
A lovely clever play with words. X In love sometimes two and two are five.
from zero we can go anywhere. No rules-no logic. we'll build a new number. ~rick
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