Still waiting for a new sunshine
Not the first time
When you kiss my lips
And make me bliss…
Still waiting for so much to feel.
This heart so bright
Is so sad inside.
Still waiting for a single sign.
Dreaming
Always dreaming
You are at my side.
Such lovely pictures
Make up this mind.
You whisper words to me
I cannot recognise
I am kind of deaf and blind
But feel the presence
Of your touch.
Two bodies in perfect motion.
Passion flows,
Love grows,
Romance goes
So far
As far as I know,
The furthest I can hold…
Where did all the rest go?
You set me free from this apathy.
Getting out of the mist
Out of such ecstasy.
Where have I been?
Here I am.
Fixed.
Still.
Waiting for the sunshine.
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21 comments:
I am so waiting on my sunshine as well!!!
I nominated you in Jingles Poet Rally!
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may that sunshine warm you... sigh
Beautiful poem, Dulce. The lingering, the yearning of love - it all so wonderfully captured in this poem. The sensuality and passion is just astounding, I loved and absorbed every word.
You never fail to amaze me, Dulce! :D
Wos Dulce! It feels like something I could express myself into!
Just beautiful, very soft and delicate poem.
Love it :)
this is wonderful my friend. So well written. I like it :)
Precioso poema, lleno de ilusion,
un placer leerte.
que tengas una feliz semana.
and when the sunshines finally gets to shine - it beams!
Lovely poem.
Sunshine "...make me hap-py, when skies are gray..." (Old Song)
(Another old song)
Dulce...is it that "...your dreams are get-tin' bet-ter all the time"?
Well, dream on, because dreams are what make the world go around--or stop...
Actually, this is a very thoughful and good poem...I'm just being "Steve" and writing too much. So what else is new?
Take Care, Sweeter Poet!
Vivir con tanta esperanza es una gran riqueza.
Un beso
now i am inspired for lots of things ;)
thank you Dulcissima !! te amo !
something in me wants to tell you Dulce...you shine...you really shine just as you are....
Cool, Dulce! (as always...)
In the same way that Steveroni, your poem brought to my mind a couple of songs.
"...Please don't wake me,
no don't shake me.
Leave me where I am
I'm only sleeping..."
(The Beatles)
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"You are the sunshine of my life
that's why I'll always be around
you are the apple of my eye
forever you'll be in my heart..."
(Frank Sinatra)
Have a terrific weekend!
C-U...
soft and beautiful...
Son muy bellas tus poesías, son dulces y delicadas.
Muchos besos.
Despejará la niebla y brillará de nuevo el sol... un poema lleno de exquista sensibilidad. Un abrazo y buen fin de semana;)
There is some really nice rhyme here, Dulce, though it's not so much as to be overpowering. It's just right, as are the words, which imagine a lingering desire that was there and still sill sill lingers... and always will. A really lovely piece!
Have a lovely weekend, Sweetest!
Nevine
A soft and melancholic rendition. A paean of yearning. How well you string the emotions into verse.
Hugs :)
Love,
Susan
i could sense the weight in the waiting...what a beautiful poem you've so skillfully woven, dulce. this is exquisite!
I feel what you are describing.
You are a very passionate woman.
He/She will be in the marvellous situation to fall in love a goddess of Love, Lust and Passion.
I admire your poems!
lvely you,
awesome poem!
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Happy Monday!
Friendship awards 4 u.
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