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Friday, September 3

In Public... (55)




The others might see us

Even be observing us

Our intimacy…


But what we are meaning

Only to you and me

It belongs


Through our eyes

As we look

Up and down

Lips and smiles

Open love…


Why are our bodies

So tangled up?


And we join,

Get fused

In a long,

Delicious,

Sweet,

Crazy kiss...


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Picture: Kissing Couple by Louise Mooring


I am taking part in Flash 55 Friday sponsored by Mr. G Man


28 comments:

PattiKen said...

Wow, a hot one. Yes, I can imagine people would look were these two in public, but I bet they'd look away just as quickly. Steamy 55. I like it.

Carrie Van Horn said...

Dulce this one is delightful.
:-)

G-Man said...

Dulce....
You have this descriptive way about you that is always PERFECT!

Better late than never, most excellent 55 My Friend.

It was well worth the wait!

Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Sam Liu said...

When we are in passion, and in love, the world does just seem to melt away. And you capture this beautifully and lyrically in only 55 words! Great poem, Dulce :)

steveroni said...

Mr G-man wrote that you are a "romantic". Now just where in bloody hell did he get THAT idea?
--grin!

Others may observe--but only in passing--while you write:

"But what we are meaning
Only to you and me
It belongs."

Reminds me of a song (I'm a musician, right?) "I ONLY HAVE EYES FOR YOU"...as the lovers do not notice who is watching, nor do they care.

Image, yes! black-and-white with a hint of tint. Heat-coloring?? It is a H O T post, Dulce, and it IS what you do BEST. Lovely!

Anonymous said...

Woah...very hot and nice. Have a great weekend and an excellent 55 :)

my recovery said...

ah, a sexy and sweet 55!! if only i smoked!!

Brian Miller said...

smokin 55 dulce...easy to forget the world around us in those moments...smiles.

Lisa Ursu said...

let them see,
let them see!
Get fused,
we all need to. Especially
these days.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

pleasant 55.

Desert Rose said...

Extremely exotic Dulce,i love the intimacy yet in public..AMAZING ;)

moondustwriter said...

yeh - who care about who is around when those luscious lips are there

delightful 55

moon smiles

TALON said...

Lost in a kiss - neat 55!

S. Susan Deborah said...

55 and how!

Sizzling
Hot
Sensual
Ecstasy

Dulce, in complete form!!!!

Joy always dear Dulce.

~Susan

joanna said...

Beautiful sensual, and enchanting kisses. I love how you can write such beautiful words and leave us all melting away in reverie.

Beautiful 55er,

like what jstar dedicated to you.

Cheers,
Joanny

Wild Rose said...

Dulce dear this is pretty spicy and what a great turn on…loved it and forget the public haha..came via oneshot and know you from @Desert Rose page~

डा0 हेमंत कुमार ♠ Dr Hemant Kumar said...

A very sweet poetry i liked it......
Heamnt

Anonymous said...

this one drives me wildly insane with desire...

Our intimacy…


is just that for us.. maybe not for others as they watch, but for us... its so...

Claudia said...

it's so great to get lost in a kiss - and forget the world around…nice, sweet and crazy 55!

Tabitha.Montgomery said...

This is the kind of poem I like getting lost in..well done.As usual.
xo

A Plain Observer said...

nothing like a sweet crazy kiss

Nevine Sultan said...

There is nothing like one of Dulce's 55's to fuse one in a kiss that lingers and lasts and carries... through all eternity... for all time. A lovely dedication... to love.

Nevine

R. Burnett Baker said...

In Public, indeed! How often have I wished to be tangled like this and not care about the "others"? This one truly stirs the imagination of desire!

Rick

Tammie Lee said...

some intimacy is so obvious, just oozing on the surface... and yes we notice!

Anonymous said...

Thanks for your nice comments, I love them.

I have visited both your blogs and I just say one thing about them;

sensual
poetic
soulful
charisma

....that's what both of your blogs are!

I hope you are my guest in my September contest!!

LAV

Agneta, the swedish one ;)

Dulçe ♥ said...

I am amazed at all these soooooo sweet comments.
i must say > Thank you, thank, you thank you... As Susan D. says, three times makes it kinda more credible :)

I am happy to see some old friends back and these new ones... I just love it.

Hugs to you ALL!

Dulce

LarryG said...

sweet sweet times

RNSANE said...

But, of course, your 55 would have to be this luscious, sexy poem. We don't get many great 55s like this one, Miss Dulce. Fabulous.