The others might see us
Even be observing us
Our intimacy…
But what we are meaning
Only to you and me
It belongs
Through our eyes
As we look
Up and down
Lips and smiles
Open love…
Why are our bodies
And we join,
Get fused
In a long,
Delicious,
Sweet,
Crazy kiss...
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Picture: Kissing Couple by Louise Mooring
I am taking part in Flash 55 Friday sponsored by Mr. G Man
28 comments:
Wow, a hot one. Yes, I can imagine people would look were these two in public, but I bet they'd look away just as quickly. Steamy 55. I like it.
Dulce this one is delightful.
:-)
Dulce....
You have this descriptive way about you that is always PERFECT!
Better late than never, most excellent 55 My Friend.
It was well worth the wait!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
When we are in passion, and in love, the world does just seem to melt away. And you capture this beautifully and lyrically in only 55 words! Great poem, Dulce :)
Mr G-man wrote that you are a "romantic". Now just where in bloody hell did he get THAT idea?
--grin!
Others may observe--but only in passing--while you write:
"But what we are meaning
Only to you and me
It belongs."
Reminds me of a song (I'm a musician, right?) "I ONLY HAVE EYES FOR YOU"...as the lovers do not notice who is watching, nor do they care.
Image, yes! black-and-white with a hint of tint. Heat-coloring?? It is a H O T post, Dulce, and it IS what you do BEST. Lovely!
♥
Woah...very hot and nice. Have a great weekend and an excellent 55 :)
ah, a sexy and sweet 55!! if only i smoked!!
smokin 55 dulce...easy to forget the world around us in those moments...smiles.
let them see,
let them see!
Get fused,
we all need to. Especially
these days.
pleasant 55.
Extremely exotic Dulce,i love the intimacy yet in public..AMAZING ;)
yeh - who care about who is around when those luscious lips are there
delightful 55
moon smiles
Lost in a kiss - neat 55!
55 and how!
Sizzling
Hot
Sensual
Ecstasy
Dulce, in complete form!!!!
Joy always dear Dulce.
~Susan
Beautiful sensual, and enchanting kisses. I love how you can write such beautiful words and leave us all melting away in reverie.
Beautiful 55er,
like what jstar dedicated to you.
Cheers,
Joanny
Dulce dear this is pretty spicy and what a great turn on…loved it and forget the public haha..came via oneshot and know you from @Desert Rose page~
A very sweet poetry i liked it......
Heamnt
this one drives me wildly insane with desire...
Our intimacy…
is just that for us.. maybe not for others as they watch, but for us... its so...
it's so great to get lost in a kiss - and forget the world around…nice, sweet and crazy 55!
This is the kind of poem I like getting lost in..well done.As usual.
xo
nothing like a sweet crazy kiss
There is nothing like one of Dulce's 55's to fuse one in a kiss that lingers and lasts and carries... through all eternity... for all time. A lovely dedication... to love.
Nevine
In Public, indeed! How often have I wished to be tangled like this and not care about the "others"? This one truly stirs the imagination of desire!
Rick
some intimacy is so obvious, just oozing on the surface... and yes we notice!
Thanks for your nice comments, I love them.
I have visited both your blogs and I just say one thing about them;
sensual
poetic
soulful
charisma
....that's what both of your blogs are!
I hope you are my guest in my September contest!!
LAV
Agneta, the swedish one ;)
I am amazed at all these soooooo sweet comments.
i must say > Thank you, thank, you thank you... As Susan D. says, three times makes it kinda more credible :)
I am happy to see some old friends back and these new ones... I just love it.
Hugs to you ALL!
Dulce
sweet sweet times
But, of course, your 55 would have to be this luscious, sexy poem. We don't get many great 55s like this one, Miss Dulce. Fabulous.
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