.
Came down from those clouds
To see, find out
What this issue was about
.
This I won’t miss
Let’s see all that
You say you love me
.
Ok, you can make me
All yours tonight
I need to feel...
... Sense
All that
You say you love me
.
Make sure
You kiss me all over
And in your way down
You draw your passion
With your lips and fingertips..
.
At some point I’ll be lost in your eyes
While I invent my new poem
And as you free your eagerness
You’ll light my soul
And I’ll get lost in thoughts
Only I do know
And that heat of ours
Will eventually get to its climax
When I’ll be sent back
To those clouds
Where I won’t be able
To discern
Was this real
Or just a night urge?
I do not care
See you again
tomorrow…
_______________
Love Reign Over Me _by Phatpuppy (Deviantart Image)
16 comments:
I love this one, it reminds me so much of my own life lately. Sharing passion that pours naturally from me for the one I love, being there to make each others nights something to remember, a pleasure to share. Love. Nothing more needs to be said.
Beautiful poem, enjoyed start to finish. You have such a cool blog. I'm definately following.
Breathtakingly beautiful, Dulce. Sometimes, love is so overwhelming and passionate, so moving and profound, that it does seem other-worldly, a gift from the heavens, an act of divinity. I love this series of poems, your writing is philosophically layered.
whew...iy does not matter...see you tomorrow night...smokin dulce...poetry in the eyes too...nice.
This one is truly captivating and beautiful...the end is awesome! I love it Dulce! :-)
Perfect ending.
Wonderful poem Dulce.
Love that pic too!
Wow! that picture...either above, in clouds or on earth does not matter. Oh yes, you did write "I don't care", as if 'who cares'?
Dulce, amid so many beautifully placed love-words, you say:
"And as you free your eagerness
You’ll light my soul
And I’ll get lost in thoughts
Only I do know...."
Don't know WHY that sounds erotic to me, guess it's a defect in my brain--grin!
If I place your many meaningful expressions here, I'll be simply re-writing your poem, so that means "Steve--STOP!"
Somehow, your pieces are still a daily surprise and enjoyment. "..See you again tomorrow..." LOL!
Hugs! :~|
Very erotic :)
I promise not to be late...
this was a fast ride into my dreams
The image and then wonderful words. I let myself imagine and spent a few moments here. Thanks
Hey girl...tomorrow came and went!
BTW, maybe you'd consider putting those transparent leaves back into your blog background. Ummmm, just a thought.
Steverino
i like the thought of falling... right back where it's comfortable.
I love the wanting in it sweet Dulce ..
'Make sure
You kiss me all over
And in your way down
You draw your passion
With your lips and fingertips..'
Beautiful post x
It is beautiful, cloud-like and sensual
very nice
Sensual, erotic love, does it get any better? I don't think so, a treasure of collective thoughts wrapped in a silk overlay of beautiful words.
Just divine, your partner must be very happy....lol
Cheers,
Joanny
sorry I have not been here sooner to comment -- away and then tech problems..
Such a delightful poem, alluring and tantalizing...and, then, there is tomorrow!! One waits in anticipation.
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